I have made some changes to my profile. Please take a look and give me any feedback. Thanks!

xoxox
tanya

to long I will never finsh reading it

I like it Whoever the man is that will find you will be very lucky. Your a great person and a great friend too.

Thank you! Your royal Highness, I will keep that in mind.

you....changed it

YOu go girl..you know what you want and you will know when and if the time is right to get it.

Thank you! Right back at ya!

anytime!!!

only a little.

i thought it was fine

oh come on guys!

is it too long like bill suggested?

Good things about it?

Poor things about it?

thank you!

These are my suggestions.

Think about putting the alfred lord tenyson and other quotes at the bottom. Yes make the man work for your love but not initially (this includes him having to scroll down within the first minute). Get right into the meat and potatoes. You want his attention to stick like a piece of gum on the ground in the hot sun.


About me: GREAT!

My life: Put a line in about your children.

Education: change to "My Education:"

"Bacholors" is mispelled.

Think of slimming this section down a bit it's getting a little wordy. Strike the second to the last line and instead state at the beginning of the last line "Eventually I plan...

Maybe try ~*~* or something cutesier as a border or don't use one at all. Keep the same border for the whole thing if you use one. It will look better.

The line after the !!!!!!!!!! scares me off. Get rid of it. Just keep the last line of that mini-section.

Move the text messaging part to the bottom with the quotes.

"What I am looking for in a partner:"

This is way too big. You do not need to explain why you want someone who doesn't use drugs or how important honesty is to you. Just list the attributes. With no explanations. See what it looks like and if you can go with it.

More tidbits about me:
Most is ok but get rid of saying "you still rock" instead state "I rock". No need to put time into the equation at all. You are timeless. Sell it!

Oh and if someone does message you, do not forget him. Message him back at all costs. Your number one priority should be getting the love of your life here. Making the guy feel like that is great for our egos. Indifference sux. I like to say if someone sends me a message I will message them back. I make the promise right away to prove I do what I say.

Lastly the profile pic. You are a beautiful woman. Take out the curlers and show the guys that fact. I honestly think that is the number one drawback to your profile.

I would suggest getting your hair done professionally and then doing the shots right after that. It is what models do because it works best. Sell yourself and don't sell yourself short. I love the curler shot for your being a character it shows humor but it is also not attractive when looking for someone.

take care and hope some of this helps.

thank you, destinys dream

not a problem let me know if you want me to give another look later and I will try to help.

I'm really one to talk. If you see my profile it's not anything like it's supposed to be.

take care

I'll probably make changes in about a week or so... i'll let you know when i do.

I agree with Last Shot..way to long, I clicked off before I was 25% done babe..Wow.. thats a Blog not a profile...Guys want to know who you you are, what you are and if your fun..paragraph will do...Max..

how many showers a day do u take? if u brush your teeth in the shower?