Topic: rate me baby
s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:32 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Fri 05/16/08 09:09 PM
rate me baby
look at me
here i am
wanna be

felt by you
seen true
into you
topic who

derives attention
speculation
anticipation
vindication

make my effort
go away
work for me
didn't say

how i move you
make you plead
look too good to
be believed

centrocentric
insecure bait
precariously needy
weakly unsafe

ljcc1964's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:33 PM
Not so much...

bastet126's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:35 PM
nice write...but how is that different than this? huh

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:36 PM

Not so much...


laugh well i knew this was going to get some different responses laugh

bastet126's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:36 PM


Not so much...


laugh well i knew this was going to get some different responses laugh


attention whore!! laugh flowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:38 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Fri 05/16/08 08:41 PM

nice write...but how is that different than this? huh


oh i've said huh before...
that is sort of the point...

drinker laugh

kc0003's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:39 PM
i am sort of afraid to respond to this one
so disregard this post...

you can still have the drink though.... drinker


Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:41 PM
Interesting take on the way things go here S1ow

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:42 PM

i am sort of afraid to respond to this one
so disregard this post...

you can still have the drink though.... drinker


laugh drinker drinker

don't be such a ChIcKeN laugh

isaac_dede's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:43 PM
centrocentric? more like egocentric...laugh

d4tc's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:44 PM
Fascinating...

laugh

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:44 PM

Interesting take on the way things go here S1ow


it's a different way of expressing
my other one on this theme entitled "dilemma"

i just thought i would try something
"different"

laugh laugh laugh

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:48 PM

Fascinating...

laugh


i am truly sorry. laugh

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:49 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Fri 05/16/08 08:50 PM

centrocentric? more like egocentric...laugh


"egocentric" lacks a certain poetical je ne saverais jamais quoi...

hikerchick's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:52 PM
This poem reminds me of someone..hmm, can't put my finger on it:smile:

s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:57 PM

This poem reminds me of someone..hmm, can't put my finger on it:smile:


deja vu?

hikerchick's photo
Fri 05/16/08 09:08 PM


This poem reminds me of someone..hmm, can't put my finger on it:smile:


deja vu?


all over again!laugh

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 05/17/08 10:35 AM


Interesting take on the way things go here S1ow


it's a different way of expressing
my other one on this theme entitled "dilemma"

i just thought i would try something
"different"

laugh laugh laugh



Diferent you truly are mister!! Thank God for this!flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:50 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Rate me,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm okay
Different Yet Intriguing,, bigsmile flowerforyou

drinker drinker

s1owhand's photo
Mon 05/19/08 08:17 AM
Oh NO! Not THIS again! laugh laugh laugh laugh

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