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Topic: Creative writing story - continue it for me
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Fri 05/09/08 09:27 AM
Please continue the story for me..

The skies are dark for many days now as a thunderous roar is heard behind the mountains. Perhaps a black dragon has awaken as the inhabitants of the town of Sinatorium are nervous. It begins to rain followed by thunder and lightning. A young man in common clothing stands on the cobblestone street and sees a woman in distress...

delrose's photo
Fri 05/09/08 09:34 AM
he is new to the town having come down from the mountain seeking safer haven from the storm and the eerie atmosphere. His first instinct is to offer help to a woman in distress. But he hesitates . . . this is not a normal night and I am a stranger here, what will befall a good samaritan on such an evil night?

mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/09/08 09:40 AM
in the shadows a pair of glowing eyes appears. the hair on the back of the mans neck stand up as he shivers. the woman says beware of the things that bump in the night for they do more then just rattle the door hinges...and you can be sure that we are not alone here....

Barbus's photo
Fri 05/09/08 09:53 AM
A second set of glowing eyes appear before the traveller, "yes bump indeed," a male voice says, "you may have been safer where you came from, but now that you're here...."

silverwaya's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:04 AM
The rain pelts down on him like small rocks falling from the heavens. He pulls his cloak tighter around him trying to keep out the rain and cold. He walks towards the woman not knowing yet if he will get involved or not. He has never seen himself as the good samaritan type. As he gets closer he sees that a man is accosting her. He attempts to say something, "You there, Leave her alone." The man raises his head from her neck and turns to look at him. She screams in fear.
The man's eyes glow red and he bears sharp fangs. He hisses at him, " This is no concern of yours unless you want to be next." not having anyway to defeat such a creature that he has never seen he turns to walk away. He looks over his shoulder,"I'm sorry" The creature resumes his nightly feeding on the woman as her screams are cut short by the loss of blood.

Rathil_Thads's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:10 AM
Hearing the doomed womans screams the wanderer realizes that he must do something. Even if it costs him his life. How can he live with the fact he just let an innocent woman die. The man quickly looks around and finds a plank of wood on the ground. He picks it up and charges the creature. A loud battle cry cuts through the air.

LEAVE HER ALONE!!! He yells as he approaches the creature

The creature looks up at the last second only to see the plank of wood descending upon his head. Just before the board connects with his head the creature vanishes. The man not knowning what just happened went to the woman who was weak from loss of blood but still very much alive. He picks her up and begins carrying her towards the closest town. That is until he hears the hideous laughter emanating from the darkness behind him.

mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:17 AM
A dark elf steps out from the shadows with her eyes glowing red. You human's are always trying to be so brave to save your females...she hissed at him. You won nothing from you're little display of foolishness. She is dead and you are covered in her blood...

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:17 AM
A third set of eyes emanated from the dark as they looked upon the weary traveller. The three sets of eyes come out of the shadows, with their silvery tongues, wrapping around the fanged creature.
The fanged creature disappears unto the night, as he leaves a message for all to hear. "I will be back for my claim."
Theses, Rathsphere and Gulhand are the three sets of eyes, that belong to a three-headed creature, that lurks in the shadows, that follow innocence wherever it is present. They are the embodiments of truth, loyalty and hope.

joshyfox's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:26 AM
*In a tree a strange oddity of a beast watches on curiously. The creature resembling a small green bird with one eye and a tiny cat's head. The strangely intelligent beast watches on, wondering what is going on and why were those people attacked. What did they ever do wrong?*

mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:31 AM
The dark elf that spoke to the human crept up behind the curious little beast and grabs his neck breaking it between her fingers. She carries him back to the cave she calls home and drains his blood into a plate and adds human teeth to it. She is no ordinary dark elf...she is a necromancer. Speaking in elvish tongue she casts a spell on the human she spoke to.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:39 AM
Before the spell could be vexed, the three-headed creature stepped in the way, guarding the human traveller. As he was protected he ducked into a tavern with the woman he carried in his arms, looking for help with the lifeless body in his arms.

cuppy59's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:43 AM
Before the dark elf could finish what she had begun....A strong wind whipped up in the backround...Trees started to sway back and forth. Out of a small hole crawled a tiny Hobbit watching the dispicable behavior of the creatures that wander at night. She decides to watch in the shadow...hoping to go unnoticed. Her hand are tied.

silverwaya's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:44 AM
She watched the events of the night unfold before her in the shadows.
Such a curiosity she has never seen. Such death and mutilation for no apparent reason. She pulls her cloak about her to try to keep the dampness at bay. She has traveled far just to come to this. She chuckles softly to herself.
She watches the cloaked man try to take the woman's body to a parish. He knocks on the door trying to awaken someone. The door opens with a small frail looking man in robes grumbling to himself about being woke up at this hour. Seeing that his services are needed, he allows the cloaked man to bring her body into the parish and closes the door.

joshyfox's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:49 AM
Edited by joshyfox on Fri 05/09/08 10:56 AM
The poor one-eyed creature remained dead. He would've learned a lesson in minding his own business, if he wasn't dead. I guess it's true what they say, curiosity killed the cat...bird...thing.

mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/09/08 10:50 AM
The cleric at the parish clears off a table to lay the woman on. There was alot of blood covering her clothes but there was still a faint heartbeat. The vampire had not totally drained her, but the cleric knew that since she survived the bite that she would turn in just a few hours. He noticed a marking on the woman's arm...she was a demons slave.

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Fri 05/09/08 10:57 AM
The cleric turns to his assistant, "Though I may revive her, the Vampire's Venem has gone too far, she will soon be one of them, pity. I do know of one cure, but it is risky, we must find the lead vampire of the guild from where the offending biter is from, and kill him. If you take out the leader, the followers will return to their former selves."

Jiacomo, the assistant, tries to clear his throat (ulp) "please tell me you are joking, us go through an entire Vampires Guild?"

Laughture fills the room, "you fool, that is why we hire someone out to do the dirty work for us, do you think I am stupid enough to go after those bloodsuckers myself? The Vampire race has advanced so far over the years, I have heard rumors that traditional methods of repelling them are not working on some of the younger newer guilds, it is like they are mutating genetically."

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Fri 05/09/08 11:02 AM
Edited by joshyfox on Fri 05/09/08 11:02 AM
"The only other option is to destroy her before she turns and you know we both don't want to have to do that." The Cleric replies sadly. "You know this is true Jiacomo, would you have her blood on your hands because you refused to try?"

silverwaya's photo
Fri 05/09/08 11:11 AM
Standing out side the window, she listens to the words being passed inside. The rain has turned into an eerie mist. Seems suitable to fit the nights events. A loud screech is heard overhead and the flapping of wings.
She wonders if there is anyone brave enough or stupid enough to go up against an elder vampire.


mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/09/08 11:13 AM
Idara the dark elf was raging because her spell was not cast on the human. She summoned the demon Hexaforey and told him of his slaves escape. Hexaforey with his fangs and razor nails both dripping in blood from the human he consumed for dinner left quickly to find his property before she died in the humans hands. What good would she do him dead...he had plenty of dead followers but he needed the live one to bring him more souls to invade.

Barbus's photo
Fri 05/09/08 11:13 AM
"My hands, you're the cleric, not me, I was just following orders," Jiacomo whines, as a bead of sweat rolls down his face.

"Ahh, but I have a reputation in this town, who do you think they are going to believe, me, or a halfbreed such as yourself?" The Cleric fires back. "You were nothing when I found you, lower than the belly of a snake, then I made you what you are today."

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