Well since my last post got some good reviews I decided to bring out some of my other works for your enjoyment so here goes I'll all include how old I was when I wrote the poems originaly. I also made some corrections to them using spell check ect lol so here goes.

Nevermore Age: 13
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You say you love me,
I say yeah sure.
You say you need me,
I point towards the door.
You say your sorry you hurt me,
You hurt many me times before.
As I lean and slowly close that door,
I quote the raven’s song,
Nevermore.

Bleed Age: 16
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I feel the blade,
Now cutting in.
Warm,
Wet,
Sticky,
Sweet.
The pain searing,
Burning,
Building now,
It doesn’t match the pain you caused me.
The lights fade,
My body goes cold and weak,
Nightmare born from a dream.
I will always love you,
Loved you I always have.
Once a hundred dreams come true,
You asked me what I’d do for you.
This is my answer,
Through and through,
I will bleed and die for you.


The Stranger Age: 25
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I never thought I could love someone,
I really never knew.
And then the night came,
When I met you.
It was strange and frightening,
All at once.
What to make of it,
I had no clue.
You told me that you wouldn’t hurt me,
You’d always lend a hand.
When I was in trouble,
You’d help me make my stand.
You brought a smile to me face,
And joy to my heart.
To tell u how I felt,
I couldn’t even start.
So instead I lean close,
And whisper as you sleep.
I love you now,
And in my heart,
You forever I will keep.

Well hope you enjoyed please leave me comments or feel free to send me mail to let me know even if its just to tell me you think they sucked lol.

J. McFann 5/9/2008

yes did enjoy...and welcome

bump, we were just talking the other day.How this sight has grown so I'm bumping the new guy...good writes AnubisChaos