Topic: Burrining Desire and The Dream
AnubisChaos109's photo
Fri 05/09/08 12:59 AM
Burrning Desire
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Hatred burnning,
Love returning,
The dieing lost without a trace.
When we the loveless,
Learn to love,
We will be loved,
With burnning desire.

The Dream
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I see you there.
Looking at me from across the flame.
Your eyes reflecting the low fire light.
Am I dreaming or is this real?
Reallity is so hard to tell sometimes.
Then I feel it,
As if slipping away,
It all fades to black,
As if to some far forgotten land of old.
I wake with tears on my pillow,
And then weep.
For u were only a dream,
And are now gone.

J. McFann 2008

codelockbox's photo
Fri 05/09/08 01:02 AM
drinker drinker

AnubisChaos109's photo
Fri 05/09/08 01:02 AM
I know i typo a lot give it up for the dyslexic poet lol

EtherealEmbers's photo
Fri 05/09/08 01:06 AM
welcome to jsh... and the poetry corner flowerforyou


CleanBathroom's photo
Fri 05/09/08 01:06 AM
Typos can be repaired. Talent cannot.

good work dude drinker glasses

AnubisChaos109's photo
Fri 05/09/08 01:08 AM
Yeah Burnning Desire belive it or not I wrote when i was 13 years old and The Dream I wrote just a few hours ago.