Topic: ~Angel of Mercy~ | |
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An angel of mercy surrounded by death
I Love You!Anna;until my final breath Year of 1944 in some town of Bastogne A nurse from Paris so fearfully alone Constant bombing lights starless night Wounded screams lend a dreadful fright She's smeared w/blood & chilling stare Precious small hands w/beauty so fair Germans advance on this battered town Bodies strewn on the snow filled ground These men cut off yet they shun defeat In a War this guardian & angel did meet With skillful hands and courage to save The harrowing events yet mightily brave Her eyes filled w/tears as another died An urge to scream as I stood by her side Haunted by memories of the dying breaths Victory nor Defeat masks untimely deaths Some soldiers duty to claim a life today We tirelessly attempt to cheat death away Dear Anna;I'm devastated that you're gone I have your blue scarf but a heart is torn Just a soldiers dream of winning her heart Though the battle and toils kept us apart Rest now sweet angel for you are at peace No longer dwell where man acts like beast Know in your heart with each prayer I say Eventually we'll be together 4ever I day Written by CyPoet 5/7/08 |
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Tear jerker for sure...but so lovely it's worth it!
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Winx~
FaithfulOne~ No1sLove~ {{{{{bear~hug}}} |
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As always amazing.You never cease to amaze me with your writes.As you already know it was you and Kristi that got me starting to write.And as always amazing my friend
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Woo-Hoo!it's Pammy-Poo I'm glad 2 see ya & hear from ya my bearific friend. I hope ur feeling good hun.Thx!sweetheart 4 that beautiful compliment.I am bearifically happy 2 hear that I inspire U,& Kristi will be equally pleased.I actually perceive that also as a blessing dear.Well just my thoughts anyhow.I wuv ya,(chin-up)Yay! ttyl/my bearific friend.{{{bear~hug}}}
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Hugs right back at you.And my chin is up one day at a time.Just keep doing what you do
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Cy, that was an excellent poem my friend.. and I know it's based on a true story, I saw the band of brother series, and I know exactly the two people you speak of.. awesome write Cy..
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Cy, that was an excellent poem my friend.. and I know it's based on a true story, I saw the band of brother series, and I know exactly the two people you speak of.. awesome write Cy.. Wow!very kewl bro.Yep! that's 1 of my all time fav.'s 4 sure.I served w/101st Airborne myself.Though thankfully not in WW2 hey.That was very moving indeed which of course inspired me 2 write a short piece on it.It leaves U haunted in a sense because if there love had been allowed 2 blossom vs.the sad outcome in the story.Thx!4 reading bro.Ur bearific friend 4ever.Godspeed!Cy |
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Cy, that was an excellent poem my friend.. and I know it's based on a true story, I saw the band of brother series, and I know exactly the two people you speak of.. awesome write Cy.. Wow!very kewl bro.Yep! that's 1 of my all time fav.'s 4 sure.I served w/101st Airborne myself.Though thankfully not in WW2 hey.That was very moving indeed which of course inspired me 2 write a short piece on it.It leaves U haunted in a sense because if there love had been allowed 2 blossom vs.the sad outcome in the story.Thx!4 reading bro.Ur bearific friend 4ever.Godspeed!Cy It's one of my favorites as well, I actually watched it quite a few times, I did have the series once, but my exwife ended up with it.. |
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Very intense and haunting, yet with hope/promise for future reunion .... |
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Very intense and haunting, yet with hope/promise for future reunion .... Thx!sweetheart.Your words are so true indeed. |
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Bravo, I really enjoyed this poem. I don't mean this to sound egotistical, but the way it read, telling a story, it reminded me of my poems.
This is one of your best |
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(((CY))) Loving write... |
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Woo-Hoo!it's Pammy-Poo I'm glad 2 see ya & hear from ya my bearific friend. I hope ur feeling good hun.Thx!sweetheart 4 that beautiful compliment.I am bearifically happy 2 hear that I inspire U,& Kristi will be equally pleased.I actually perceive that also as a blessing dear.Well just my thoughts anyhow.I wuv ya,(chin-up)Yay! ttyl/my bearific friend.{{{bear~hug}}} Could not have said it any better then you just did. Great write, it's good to see you writing again here have missed your poems |
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Thx!Dr.X 4 dropping by & reading.I'm glad U liked it bro.I enjoy reading your work btw.Some is quite dark & laced w/pain.However if U read some of my earlier work under my pen name Cybear U would say the same of mine.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ MsTeddy how are U my bearific friend.I hope U are better hun.Wanna scratch? I'm glad U enjoyed it sweetheart.The story is very sad & moving yet so beautiful.(factual story btw).Let me know how you're feeling K. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hi!Kristi.Thx! 4 dropping by my bearific friend.I'm glad U enjoyed it hun,I really Luv the story & movie so I was inspired 2 write that piece.It's also a true story of my unit in WW2.I'm really happy sweetheart that I'm writing again.I feel more like my true self when I am writing u know.Woo-Hoo!that is bearific indeed.And Pammy is on the prowl w/us.Ms Teddy just needs a good old scratch w/my claws & she'll be a-o-k Thx!Kristi 4 keeping me inspired. |
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U would mention the word scratch...
You just would... (((Bearhuggieswhilescratchingbackonyou))) Getting better, still hurts and itches though. Baking soda just became my BFF. I feel like a hermit. (((CY))) |
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very nice cy
well done |
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U would mention the word scratch... You just would... (((Bearhuggieswhilescratchingbackonyou))) Getting better, still hurts and itches though. Baking soda just became my BFF. I feel like a hermit. (((CY))) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thx!K~C 4 stoppping by & reading,I hope U enjoyed the story bro.I really loved writing it 4 it was such a heart rendering love story though sadly surrounded by war & much death and the outcome is deeply saddening. ttyl/my friend.p.s.I Noden's poem btw.She is truly a remarkable lady & I am deeply honored 2 have her as my friend. |
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