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Edited by
No1sLove
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Wed 05/07/08 07:03 AM
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Sun on the horizon soft,
breeze whispers in my ear. With the day now lost, comes the evenings cost when no lovers voice I hear. Every noise rings louder now, mocks the silence of the dark. its reckless way, keeps sleep at bay til dawn enters with the lark. I cry, “What toll will you demand of me, to make this madness cease; to still this raging noise at last and let me sleep in peace?” “No price” it taunts, “no pound of flesh, no coin or service rendered. The only way to banish me is simply to surrender.” The toll too high, the price too steep, I sigh and lay my head down I cannot pay what I do not own so into the gloom I drown. Eyes blink open, clean breath drawn Pale light outlines my shades One more evening’s met its end; the toll yet left unpaid. The lark now sings her chipper tune of an evening come to pass. I ask, "Won’t you come back at the glooming with some song to make light last?” Now, sun on the horizon soft, breeze whispers as another day resends With the day now lost, comes the evenings cost Crap...here we go again! |
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Very nice, No1!! I like that! Well done!!
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Very nice, No1!! I like that! Well done!! |
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Very nice, No1!! I like that! Well done!! |
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WOW...you are one heck of a writer yourself there...that was beautiful.
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wow very nice
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WOW...you are one heck of a writer yourself there...that was beautiful. |
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That was absolutely beautiful.. very very well written.. I believe you also described the way a lot of people feel sometimes..
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That was absolutely beautiful.. very very well written.. I believe you also described the way a lot of people feel sometimes.. |
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very nice no1s
well done indeed |
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"The only way to banish me
is simply to surrender.” " Wow, powerful No1s .... Wonderful affective expression overall...Ty for your write |
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I'm flattered that you like it (((AngelLight))) Thanks so much for reading it.
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True talent...
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True talent... |
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good one
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"The only way to banish me
is simply to surrender" WOOOW! Speechless... |
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Thanks so very much ((D4tc)) ((123))
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