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Topic: Confusion...
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 09:38 AM
I don't know where to begin A heart that needs to mend Your feelings mixed up inside you So confused not knowing what to do Sitting,waiting,hoping,praying Do I open my heart again? Is it real or just pretend? I do believe it's real But afraid again to feel My faith is weak True love I seek Lonely are the days and nights Wanting arms to hold to hold me tight Do I trust and believe? Your heart will stay and never leave

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 04/24/08 09:38 AM


lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/24/08 09:41 AM
Beautiful Pam... we all have these fears and can only pray and do the best we can to make it right for us... Be happy in all you do!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/24/08 09:42 AM
(((Pam)))

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Thu 04/24/08 09:54 AM
{{{{{Pam}}}}} Just be happy.......honey... That's all that really matters in the end

1956CLEO Joined Wed 10/03/07 Posts: 4518	Thu 04/24/08 10:01 AM
So beautiful, I believe most people feel this way. So beautifully done.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Thu 04/24/08 10:15 AM
One will never know if they keep their heart closed

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 11:21 AM
One will never know if they keep their heart closed You my friend no me well,yep I tend to keep that heart closed thank you all for your thoughts

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/24/08 11:23 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww sweetie you already know my thoughts,,, Love you,, Follow your heart, the soul will guide

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 12:40 PM
{{{{{Pam}}}}} Just be happy.......honey... That's all that really matters in the end Joanne hugs sweetie

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 12:41 PM
Awwwwwwwwwww sweetie you already know my thoughts,,, Love you,, Follow your heart, the soul will guide and I love you and so appreciate your thoughts

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 04/24/08 12:47 PM
A great piece ((((Pam)))). Ty for sharing the depths of what you are feeling. Open your heart again luv! I've been through the same thing. It is said that an open heart can embrace the whole world, and this is true!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 04/24/08 12:55 PM
nice write pam

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 03:25 PM
Angel..thank you so much Kevin...thank you so much

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 07:45 PM
Beautiful Pam... we all have these fears and can only pray and do the best we can to make it right for us... Be happy in all you do! Thank you Vicki I do try to be happy and live my life to the fullest and a lot of prayer.But sometimes one gets overwhelmed (my life story)and confusion and fear and putting up that wall been doing it so long> I know I have to let it down so for once I can be happy instead of making everone eles happy.I hope this makes some sense.I'm tring girl

mry Joined Thu 08/23/07 Posts: 8401	Thu 04/24/08 07:47 PM
Oh Pam, I feel like vomiting...

lizethmarina Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 229	Thu 04/24/08 07:48 PM
Beautiful write.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/24/08 09:47 PM
Oh Pam, I feel like vomiting... you are bad girl not going out no more with you thank you Lizethmarina

Angelface2000 Joined Mon 03/10/08 Posts: 1930	Thu 04/24/08 11:10 PM


Knightime Joined Tue 12/04/07 Posts: 1848	Fri 04/25/08 12:48 AM
thats way they call it the leap of faith.... nice