Topic: DeathsTreaty's Fear and Tear Bar | |
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Good evening Fak.
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eat...drink and be mundanely somber
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eat...drink and be mundanely somber |
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do share the finishing touches if you can! i think broodingintellect will be delighted...in a wicked way that is
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Edited by
wyatt1844
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Thu 04/24/08 07:32 PM
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Push on through that heavy hinged wooden door,
Enter where blood red carpet oozes across the floor, Implements of destruction hang upon these haunted walls And torch's eerily light guides you down the gloomy halls The walls turn away to reveal a dark dungeon's lobby Now you come to a place, a demented soul's new hobby The candles in thier lonliness how they dance and flicker And don't mind the dark corners where the shadows snicker The couches are old and worn with tares and tatter But once they darkly embrace, nothing else will matter Chairs of deep mahogony made with tombstone spines The Tender Bastet will serve you bloody spirits and wine So come and wander through Brooding's Ninth Level Where you can imbibe a potion, or just speak to the devil A lonesome candelabra will cry its bloody red tears As you leisure and ponder; or face your darkest fears For those with woe within their heart or soul of dark mundane Join us in the fiery depths of Death Treaty's gloomy reign Mix you up a bloody vice and perch upon a coffin Once you taste the the darker side you will come back often |
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Your words made a wonderful ending / last impression.
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bloody awesome!!!
and what is really scary is,,,i fell asleep the other night thinking of this, and you nailed the front door!! i see a carving on it too - gargoyles perhaps? i was thinking crosses too...hmmmm? but wow, that was excellent!! |
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I thought about the gargoyles...but couldn't make it fit.
I actually tried about three different lines, but couldn't make it flow. |
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it sounds great!! love your dark thoughts!
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Impressive Wyatt...the dark is calling...time to succumb to it's peace and quiet...nite all
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later FAK
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Very nice DarkEnlightment ^^
That is a wonderfully dark write ^^ |
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treaty
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Hello Gentlemen ^^
My last few moments here...for a while ^^" Hows your day been? |
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Ok after all I guess.
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So out of curiosity... why the break? Something happen?
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I wrote a post this morning that kind of explains ^^
its called "Bye" its in the chitchat area... Ill look for the link... |
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So you going to school or something?
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Im still in High school....
Im not a very good student.... I fail all my classes... |
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