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Topic: I live in a world....
Anonwho Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 174	Tue 04/15/08 05:49 PM
I live in a world A world of peace I live in a world A world of love I died in this world Yet I am still alive inside I live in a world A world of hate I live in a world A world of dispair I died in this world Yet I am still alive inside I live in a world A world of peace I live in a world A world of hate I died in this world Yet I am still alive inside I live in a world Where all of this happens I'll die in this world Tell me what you think of my 7 year old poem.

barefootbaby78 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 2693	Tue 04/15/08 05:51 PM
all things in life must die...keep the flame within you burning good write

Anonwho Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 174	Tue 04/15/08 05:52 PM
all things in life must die...keep the flame within you burning good write I have been contemplating on taking up writing again. Good release of emotions.

barefootbaby78 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 2693	Tue 04/15/08 05:53 PM
i say go for it....youre pretty dern good

Army_Strong Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1254	Tue 04/15/08 05:54 PM
Nice. It is a good release, I haven't been inspired lately

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 04/15/08 05:58 PM
Obssession is the nature of modern life

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 04/15/08 05:59 PM
Very nice writing. Go for it.

Anonwho Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 174	Tue 04/15/08 06:02 PM
Well if you all are going to be on for a while I also have a short story I can post for you all to read.

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