Topic: ~Hamster In A Cage~ | |
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Edited by
ellgee1976
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Wed 04/09/08 10:11 AM
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Hamster in a cage,
Obsticles left and right, Running for no wage, Barely stopping for a bite. Wheel suddenly stops, Confusion consumes, Right before her head pops, Moving wheel resumes. What's the pay off? Where's the reward? Nothing you can think of? Why not move forward? Forward to what? Ahead is just more wheel. Seems she only putz, No way to make a deal. Hamster in a cage, Obsticles left and right, Running for no wage, Barely stopping for a bite. April 8, 2008 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice write, now I'm sitting n grinning lmao ~Den |
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thnx guys
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I love it when you write,,, |
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thanx LAmom
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I liked this, a good metaphor.
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Jimz, you're the only one that caught it so far...thank you
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Hamster in a cage, Obsticles left and right, Running for no wage, Barely stopping for a bite. Wheel suddenly stops, Confusion consumes, Right before her head pops, Moving wheel resumes. What's the pay off? Where's the reward? Nothing you can think of? Why not move forward? Forward to what? Ahead is just more wheel. Seems she only putz, No way to make a deal. Hamster in a cage, Obsticles left and right, Running for no wage, Barely stopping for a bite. April 8, 2008 ![]() I feel that. ![]() |
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thanx totage
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