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no arbitrary thesis
with a grin that ceaseless with a face meant to calm wears her smile like a prostheses you can see the folds and the creases caked with powder and balm |
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You talkin' 'bout me?
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You talkin' 'bout me? no no i have a feeling you can make a mighty frown |
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hiker-
trailing- interesting...
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hiker-
trailing- interesting...
By gizmo, You're right! It's fate, I tell ya. |
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hiker-
trailing- interesting...
thank you teddy
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In all seriousness, this poem evokes quite a vivid picture.
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In all seriousness, this poem evokes quite a vivid picture. i thought so too thanks imagery is everything |
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I was thinking scarey picture...
powder and balm... (shivers) |
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I was thinking scarey picture...
powder and balm... (shivers) i was thinking the nurse from one flew over the cuckoos nest |
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yes, yes nurse Ratched
nice work
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yes, yes nurse Ratched nice work
ms ratched yes great movie great book im glad u like it
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Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nive one..
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That makes sense now that I've read the posts... Nice write and imagery
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Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nice one..
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Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nive one..
thank you its about all i can get out short and sweet |
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That makes sense now that I've read the posts... Nice write and imagery
thank you im happy you like i dont know if my posts ever make sense to anyone but me but its fun anyway |
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interesting...