stranger here...

just a glimpse can say that u love dogs. but there are too many of just them. may be pics with u in them along side them will help.

its too verbose. u say everything abt urself. leave something to be discovered. not every one has all the time to read it all. so highlight critical stuff some how or just delete stuff u really can do by sharing once contact is established.

personally, i would feel more comfortable if i had points to start a conversation... which means there are things i want to know abt ... rather than everything being out in the open.

just my perspective..... u dont have to agree with it though!