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Poem Challenge
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Rather than create a new thread, I'm gonna post here. There I was drifting... way out into the sunshine, expecting to crash but I'm tied to a string. There's no intentions worthy of mention if we never try, so hang your hopes on rusted-out hinges, take 'em for a ride. Yeah I'm free... free fallin'. Into the great wide open. Ain't nothin' gonna break my stride. Heaven isn't too far away. We'll all be drinkin' that free bubble up... I've got nothing more to say. Playlist: http://music.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL7z34gE4SX9RkFpD8bFPKvmEEZz4XLkcc&si=uuKv95OgErQ_aU2s |
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Topic:
Poem Challenge
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Rather than create a new thread, I'm gonna post here.
There I was drifting... way out into the sunshine, expecting to crash but I'm tied to a string. There's no intentions worthy of mention if we never try, so hang your hopes on rusted-out hinges, take 'em for a ride. Yeah I'm free... free fallin'. Into the great wide open. Ain't nothin' gonna break my stride. Heaven isn't too far away. We'll all be drinkin' that free bubble up... I've got nothing more to say. |
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Topic:
Little things
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Good stuff, Vibes.
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Good stuff, Mig.
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This is a well composed reflective expression.
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Twin Flames
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The classic rhyme and structure enhanced the enjoyment delivered in this elevating expression.
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Topic:
False Equivalence
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Very well said. Thanks my friend. |
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Topic:
False Equivalence
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Confused = understand understandably confused = duh! 
Thanks for your input, Mike. |
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Topic:
False Equivalence
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Thanks for your comment, Robin.
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Rex Akar
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Carson O'Genic
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False Equivalence
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***-kissing = paying dues
paying dues = membership membership = elite elite = celebrity celebrity = talent talent = achievement achievement = wealth wealth = earned humble = yawn glamour = catcall free lunch = no such thing bootstraps = independence loud = authority mouthy = leader opinionated = expert fairness = scoff optimist = naive questioning = insubordinate human nature = dog-eat-dog |
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Buffett was perhaps my all time favorite to see on stage, and hear on the radio. I saw he and the Coral Reefer band in concert twice in the 90's. Fun shows, good memories. |
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Topic:
If Only for a Moment
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A treat to read, Mig, expertly crafted writing.
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Topic:
Differences and Reactions
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Tech- ^^^ Maybe a bit patronizing but I "really" like to call out folks that make me snicker to belly laugh. I am so sorry!!.. if I come across that way!!! I am someone who enjoys everything from the most sophomoric and dirty of Limericks to the brilliance of Rumi, and Shakespeare Sonnets. I look for the positive and am NO ONE to judge where ANYONE fits in that spectrum. Not remembering any specifics but a general feeling of "that was pretty cool" I was just busting your chops because you used "Poetry is boring" as an example trigger, Beach. 
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Topic:
Differences and Reactions
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How do you react when something goes completely against your own sensibilities? I gotta go with sir Paul's take on this one, Beach... "Live and let die.". Poetry is boring In retrospect, your comments on my poems did seem a tad patronizing. 
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Topic:
The Small Things Add Up
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Thanks, Robin.
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Edited by
technovative
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Sat 09/02/23 10:26 PM
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American songwriter, singer, and chill vibes maestro, Jimmy Buffett set sail for calmer shores on the first day of September 2023. His 76 years of perpetual motion helped bring balance to many a weary soul, through soothing and playful reminders to savor life's simple pleasures, even while navigating rough sea's.
Learning of his death jolted me. The humanity of his songs and the poetic brush he painted with, spanned between scenes of laid-back leisure and relatable real-life mosaics. These songs have, and will continue to inform and comfort me. http://twitter.com/POTUS/status/1698022437340819623?ref_src=twsrc%5Egoogle%7Ctwcamp%5Eserp%7Ctwgr%5Etweet http://www.wsj.com/story/jimmy-buffetts-life-in-photos-ad699bbb |
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Topic:
Lost~
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This is a touching heart-wrenching expression of emotions I empathize with, Storm.
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Topic:
Streaming Flow
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You never cease to amaze me. Your thoughtful feedback is much appreciated, Storm. |
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