good write

good write!

Rebel peaceful healthfood chicks
rebel sex, drug, rock n'roll hicks
every street i'm hit up
for a cigerette
bloods, biker's and brothers
and so many sisters
so much yet so little in us
and bush and iraq
take on the other war
somewheres else to make,
defensive rules called
"patriot act"
and clean conforms
tangled and bought
offensive courts
and duty formality
either stay home, or spend
alot
stop!
for still I walk
amidst the
cinch-going righteous
and heaven shares sold
bible selling conmen that
perpetuate the propaganda and
cry on tv for drama
with the city which follows
no countryman
would or could I understand
anything said
between hi and bye
which is sad
and neat and fine
a hung just fine
Just a last scream
one first
and last
vent
just before I
just smile
and go to bed,
just in case such things
get much better in the morning
time
11/17

thank you

you are a candle of an hour
harmony of power
no more or less than
stars that lead and twinkle at us from above

if you are red,
or blue,
green or
teal

than you'll play
your are what you are
numbers of who hears you
never would it matter

just so long as something
is heard by someone
your famous but don't know it yet
and you will always be rich

You offer me sun
without any rain
like a blanket
comfort from pain
within the eye of storm

and gave me a rose
petals scented, sweet and torn
picked off from above the thorns

I saw no blood
on either
hand

I saw only the gentleness
and roughness in your
eyes

11/17/08

I just really like it!

terrific, (how do you do that)? well done.

good one

really like it

wow...
true song writer, awesome.

I was a navy brat . I know how hard it is... we were seemingly always saying goodbye and sending him off, and he was always coming back soon.

Thank you

good soulful write

greatness, luv it

love it

And if they,
if we,
is you and I
and them
and they

then let them

say, be smug and
snub
the car you drive

say for charity
is an advantage granted
to make it right

that your too young
to and don't know a thing
or too old
too be enjoying anything

or say that
the beginning
of the end
is not as
possibly
near

or lie and
claim
your soul is
not sacred
not saved
and hell
is somewhere else feared

just let them
and they

but don't consent
to allow
any of them,
they or you or I

to say the stars, moon, sun and sky
is not such any wonder

say a sparkling ballet of rain
dancing to city lights a wonder
a wonder is insufficient or never
enough
a wonder even for a moment

say music to senseless words that rhyme
or writing out your ponder
brings about nothing sufficient
otherwise, dream and ponder
and just let them

11/10/08
aries43

ahh shucks!
(hard to tug on my heart strings really, get me all touchy feely, but that did)!

A rain Sparkled
downtown ballet
afternoon matinee

The cities heart
Streets transformed
zillion Ribbons of
sparkle Drops wrapping around
tapping to my souls dance Cue

Exclusive front row
No I took a small part
Marching rhyme keep time
with others
who marched along with
but I don't know
if they looked to view
spectacular