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Edited by
jimz
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Mon 11/10/08 04:16 PM
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sun in the mutiny
lions mane drenched the sky reaching pandoras box box cutters cut soul ok right it in a rectangle where the ends meet awk ward paint the cloth of the mercy sea waves collapse sun drowns end upsheets numbers in cells yet cells number only one rock sea crusted many crabs yet no in fin ate i have one mer sea only one claw only one octupus life one sun yet i have in fin ate cloud the crowd the arms open wings heat released wings and the walls have wings or the wings are full of walls batlike upside down smile sun of the suns mask unhidden eyes the endless void ends wings upon wings |
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nicely done
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Jimmy Simply Amazing
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Very nicely done jimz.
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terrific, (how do you do that)? well done.
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A beautiful style & flow....
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