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When I go back to the Cake,, I feel control taking over and then again my mind goes back to the Cycle of Re-Verse,, A sense of tasteless Hunger fills my mind,, and I am off in the pondering stage.. Incredible write,, filled with so much passion 
THERE YOU GO THATS IT a tasteless hunger! BEAUTIFUL =] |
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Anyone else have any opinions?
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thats so extremely close its not even funny.
congrats The cake is the hugest metaphor As is the use of the homonym Night/knight |
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ah well, at least i tried =[
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THATS THE POINT hahah
Its a creative method of opening up yet remaining secretive anyone else going to try to figure it out? |
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Edited by
xxAzriahtheBeastxx
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Tue 07/22/08 03:00 PM
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my computer hates me lol its posting things twice
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lol no, youre tryin too hard, this is not to be a depressing matter, nor is it written from a deperessed or dark and demonic standpoint
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this is by no means a dark poem, quite the opposite,
It puts up a facade in order to throw off the mind |
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hahaha no, you keep jumping to the opposite extremes, just switch the ends
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quite the opposite
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The whole point of this is somewhat of a paradoxical metaphor
Its not what it seems Its never going to be |
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hahaha I dont expect cake from anyone, thats the thing
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Closer madam, closer
The Beast once had a name |
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haha to shallow
no offense But it goes much deeper than that |
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haha to shallow
no offense But it goes much deeper than that |
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Topic:
This is Kinda Deep
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giving is your problem right there, g. relationships are a two-way street. You can't just give people something awesome, and keep giving in hopes that they return the favor. Seriously. If people (especially womenz) can't see the value in the things you do for them, then they will never appreciate it. well that makes sense, I greatly appreciate it |
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And they will.....
FALL! While I must swim in a waterless pit Talking to an old sage about a Life Once Lost And the RESURRECTION of an OLD KNIGHT Such a starry night Screaming Emptiness Oh God my stomach I almost forgot eating is a bad habit, maybe I am a bad habit? ha Rebirth Knight, I am going through a cycle of reverse peristalsis of Demons and it feels so cold just END IT knight it beginds to SPILL AND I PANIC Oh for the love of the Night It's not stopping PLEASE END IT BEFORE I GO ON WRITING ABOUT =] pointless knights and nights without sharp edges A SHARP EDGE?!?!?!?!?? OOOOH! =D INTRUIGING! There is never a dull moment with such sharp interesting ideas.... brash thoughts..... Ideas that just.... CUT THE CAKE? (Or is it take the cake? I always forget!) (no no....its take the cake) BUT YOU CANT EAT THE F******* CAKE WITHOUT CUTTING IT FIRST But loves....I realize.... wuth all this talk of Holy Knights, and how I need HIM. ..........Maybe I am the (k)night?.......... You will NEVER F****** KNOW BECAUSE EONS AGO YOU GAVE THAT UP YOU LEFT THE PROMISE TO BE BURNED YOU LEFT THE KNIGHT TO DIE YOU LEFT HIM TO BE KILLED DIE O WONDROUS NIGHT DIE Lo and behold I am no longer a knight =] I will not fight for those who wish not to help the bleeding knight F*** BEING A KNIGHT For now friends =] My dear friends who left me to bleed alone =] I AM no longer living, no longer dying empty inside EMPTY INSIDE?!?!?!? DO YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS?!?!?!?!?!?!? ?!?!?! ..... ..... ..... It means im hungry 
I want cake =] -----------------------------------------------Mike Flowers tell me what its about =] lets discuss it! |
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Sad to say, you just missed me by a week, i was in ohio all of last week with family in the middleburg area
=[ hire some mexicans! theyll do it for beer and food |
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Topic:
This is Kinda Deep
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I know, it just feels so odd, after coming through this much, having died by the age of 18, and coming back from it, and with everything else going on, it just doesnt seem that way sometimes
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Topic:
This is Kinda Deep
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So about a year ago, I was in a bad accident
knocked into a coma for a week, cool stuff, yeah but with that Came the loss of smell, taste, and a lot of feeling like emotion and such With that, a low esteem doesnt help, and i just need advice on what to do Im the giving type of guy, i love to garden, and grow my own roses so i can give them to someone, i love to play music, so i love (or would love) to dedicate a show to someone. Ive never been on a date, because women view me as nothing more than just a mere crutch because i guess im too much of a sweetheart, but im also assertive, so i dont know what im doing wrong The one thing i seek is to regain the feeling ive lost so i can truly give someone all ive got Is that too much to ask? Im tired of being lied to and used, an the majority of you will say "well, thats life". I just need advice, what do I have to do to really get that person who can really help me regain that feeling? Like i said I am nothing more than just a romantic dude, but that doesnt mean im too much of a sweetheart if that makes sense? I just want to know what im doing wrong |
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