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Thu 10/08/15 11:14 PM
Missing You - Diana Ross

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Thu 10/08/15 11:13 PM
Listen to the Music - The Doobie Brothers

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Tue 10/06/15 04:07 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Tue 10/06/15 04:08 PM
Inside Out - Odyssey

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Tue 10/06/15 04:05 PM
Heaven Must Be Missing an Angel - Tavares

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Tue 10/06/15 04:02 PM
Groove With You - Isley Brothers

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Tue 10/06/15 04:00 PM
Fields Of Gold - Sting

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Tue 10/06/15 03:58 PM
Endless Love - Diana Ross & Lionel Richie

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Tue 10/06/15 03:55 PM
Double Dutch Bus - Frankie Smith

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Wed 09/30/15 04:47 AM
Edited by Dreadaye on Wed 09/30/15 04:50 AM

Hmm, tasty?
Interesting expression for Panstilly's work.


I do apologise for saying nothing.
Each time i read this piece it
creates in me a relish for reverie;
but not mindless idleness,

I enjoy the rhythms that it sets
and i follow as i read. And each
time I read that rhythm becomes
clearer to my ear and the
words go deeper, seeking me out.
homing in some buds that I knew
nothing about before i read this.
And the story becomes more vivid

So yeah, it tastes good to go deep
into the places where word meets
Feelings.

=====

Thank you most kindly for inviting me to reflect a bit more deeply aka unpacking the cipher,
on this take on theme. Love Never Ends. Again thank you Panstilly, i do not have a note
in my mind regarding 'your work' however I am certain that Ladywind7 is right.

dreadaye


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Wed 09/30/15 02:12 AM
Word Power

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Tue 09/29/15 08:26 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Tue 09/29/15 08:27 PM
Not only does this read well; but it has drawn me to re-read thrice.
This piece sets something in me stirring... As if i have some vague
(or not so) familiarity with the imaginings

Interesting. Again very enjoyable read and fine grip kept on the vision.


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Tue 09/29/15 08:14 PM


---Love Never Ends---

Sometimes i wish
I could feel
Nothing at all
And return
To the innocence
Of not knowing
Anything
Beyond what is
Expected of me
By myself
To learn
Of this life
Anew
And never to have to
Return to the pain
Or wanting
Of something
Beyond what i can have.

That longing
I tried
To kill
From my heart
And end
From my thinkings
Only serves
To make it cling
Tighter in my chest
Squeezing out
My very breath
A sigh of no relief
But a pursed-lipped exhale
To exhume
What should've been buried.

I can no more fathom
What i aim to achieve
By my tryings
Then failings
To let you see
And feel
The same as i do
As it serves you not
I make it serve
Myself instead
To rise
From the ashes
Of my mistaken ideas
And grasp
The meaning
Of fate's purpose
Of the chance
Given then taken
Prematurely from me
To end
The subject and object
Of my musings
And for once
Overcome
What i never had before.

Walk away
My heart
And leave
My mind
To mend
And strengthen
And harden
And be
In stillness
Understand it all
And move forth
In love
Without
The grip
Of unwantedness
Of unfulfillment
And open
A door
A window
To let another destiny
Begin anew.

My cycle begins
In the ending of you.

My chapter begins
In the last of yours.

My life becomes
When yours is no more.

Until then
We will meet again
Because
Love never ends.

--mgsmd "PT" 9/2015

http://mingle2.com/topic/reply/420432


Very, very tasty.

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Mon 09/28/15 04:53 PM
Really really dig that. Spoken from the heart. Stay well.

flowerforyou

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Sun 09/27/15 02:56 PM
decorated it is

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Sun 09/27/15 10:10 AM

I am not sure how many of you know that the one thing, I am so envious of the gift and talent people have with the written word. With the help of a dear friend, Dread.. I have have taken the plunge to attempt
to enter this magical realm.

This is about a special dog. Please critique me so that I can grow.
Thank you all...


Lilly's Limerick
I know and love a Dog named Lilly
She is really quite silly
I will give you the scoop
She will eat others poop
And I know you think this verse quite Dilly



Again, great job my friend. Keep writing.

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Sun 09/27/15 01:29 AM
Edited by Dreadaye on Sun 09/27/15 01:36 AM
<@> The Poetess & The Saxophone <@>


From within a cave,
Temporarily an alcove,
A naturally blown horn
Makes an enddless sound
Listening to itself
Permanently wound-up
In around exhalations of breath
blown like the wind come
to heal the soul's wounds,
At a time when words would
be too much for fingers to key.

Straining, Either ear waits to hear
A twinkling star chime
For the Seventh time
Heralding. Seven Seraphim's are here
Come knock knock knocking
On Haven's Heart.
While I wait
A : flowerforyou : in my hand
& a saxophone too
Hung by the loving arms -
Of a Natural Mystic -
Imagined to be the sling
Draped like a garland around my neck.


flowerforyou


Authors Notes/Credits & other Mingled-Up Stuff

SubTitled: & A Saxophone Too

Musical Backdrop During Composition: Bob Marley & The Wailers: Natural Mystic; & Millie Jackson: Loving Arms

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VkndVzfOeRc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xbpCvV9dAs

Imagery, Grammar & Spelling: Poetic Licence Taken

Dedicated to a special friend.

(posted here from elsewhere)

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Sat 09/26/15 07:02 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Sat 09/26/15 07:43 PM
<@> The Poetess & The Saxophone <@>

Temporarily from a cave,
a naturally blown horn
makes an enddless sound
listening to itself
permanently
wound-up in around
exhalations of breath
blown like the wind come
to heal the soul's wounds
at a time when words would
be too much for a keyboard.

While either ear waits to hear
A twinkling star chime
For the Seventh time
For Seven Seraphim's to come
Knock knock knocking
On Haven's Heart.
For me to hear while I wait
With a : flowerforyou : in my hand
& a saxophone too
Hung by the loving arms of Natural Mystic
Imagined to be the sling around my neck.

flowerforyou



Authors Notes/Credits & other Mingled-Up Stuff

SubTitled: & A Saxophone Too

Musical Backdrop During Composition: Bob Marley & The Wailers: Natural Mystic; & Millie Jackson: Loving Arms

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VkndVzfOeRc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xbpCvV9dAs

Imagery, Grammar & Spelling: Poetic Licence Taken

Dedicated to a special friend.

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Sat 09/26/15 01:59 AM

In the crevice of the rock I will shelter,
when the storms are a gale
and the dark, chaos threatens
to suck me forth
and impale
my body
with whirlwind shards.

I will stand beneath wings of seraphim
And declare
not one utterance.

Go your way blustering, pseudo love
I know where my path leads,
In truth,
in deeds,
in words,
like honey dripping
from the sword of a poe'


This will make for a brilliant piece to recite out loud. Thank you.

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Fri 09/25/15 11:39 PM
Ah well! frustrated frustrated frustratedwhy am i so stoooooooooooppppppiiiiidddd frustrated

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Fri 09/25/15 11:10 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Fri 09/25/15 11:14 PM
Isn't it peculiar how life works out.... was just able to find letter P on Part 3 of the Music - song game where we Alphabetically name a song and artist seemingly waiting there for a Dropped Dead & Beaten Up Poetless human like me to post. So guess what I did?


Pillow Talk - Sylvia Robinson
Sat 09/26/15 07:02 AM


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qefR9IimWmQ



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