well i write alot...usually heartbreak...but this is my 1st post in here

so i like critism good or bad


Only in a dream
Will i be in her arms again
One day this heart
Will stop dreaming

in her arms
the love i need
is gently kissing me

in her arms
This tortured heart
Finally feels complete

in her arms
All my worries and fears
Become distant memories

in her arms
my eyes have never known
such beauty

In her arms
my heart dies
Then the story ends
The hero has met his fate
Death in the arms
Of the one he loves
Except the hero
Is also the victim...

just um let me know

thanks for the warm reception

well i just joined the other day or so and am in the military here in the florida panhandle. Not quite what it is im looking for yet

but im sure ill find it

just introducing myself..seeing as how i have plenty of free time after work

thanks :)

it depends...all friends means is that their is less of a committment provided things dont turn romantic

also i think looking for friendship and not neccessarily dating puts less pressure when and if people go out to dinner

just my take on things

teach them lol, being a good kisser requires practice...and if a person gets offended that are a bad kisser...which most wouldnt...most just get imbarressed

so live with it or adjust to it..im sure people would try to change though if u brought it up in a nice way

kinda touchy subject though