well i write alot...usually heartbreak...but this is my 1st post in here

so i like critism good or bad


Only in a dream
Will i be in her arms again
One day this heart
Will stop dreaming

in her arms
the love i need
is gently kissing me

in her arms
This tortured heart
Finally feels complete

in her arms
All my worries and fears
Become distant memories

in her arms
my eyes have never known
such beauty

In her arms
my heart dies
Then the story ends
The hero has met his fate
Death in the arms
Of the one he loves
Except the hero
Is also the victim...

just um let me know

thats ****in sad..i love it