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Yeyy
 
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Topic:
THUG LIFE
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i know
i'm jus so gangsta though. xDD thankiez, btw |
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*hugs everyone*
FINALLY A PLACE I CAN CALL MY HOME |
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Topic:
THUG LIFE
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mmhmm
FOSHIZZLE TUPAC GOT IT CHILLED FOR HIMSELF HE PHAILED, HOES xD |
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i do<3
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Ponchopollito...
Welcome, and sorry if I have mispelled your screen name! Haha. I love this piece..one of the best I have spotted so far. A little bit of crit, though..try putting your poem into better stanzas, it's a bit blocky. Try this: "Silently I watch as voratious claws eagerly strip the meat from my heart and gnashing teeth pulverize the bones of my soul. Anger overwhelms me; As hope loses meaning, I lash out against the futility of it all and tear the remaining stars from the fabric of my sky." This is the best I could revise it.. I'd have to look at it longer for better work. I love this piece and the imagery within it..great job, and keep writing..Can't wait to see some more work! -Lozer<3 |
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Topic:
metaphor
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jimz...
hello! I really like this, though I think it may drag on a tad bit...also, there is a typo in the last stanza. I love the idea, the creativity that is this piece..it's very wonderful, and I can say I have never seen anything like it. Each stanza, each line even, is something to stop and think about, something to wonder what it means, how many meanings...what the intention is. I think you grab the reader, the title is clear, and the meaning is, though 'hidden', precisely shown. I love it. -Lozer<3 |
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Topic:
i got a new cut
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It looks smexy,
sir. 
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Topic:
xbox-ers
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I've had mine since they first came out...
and I've got quite a few games.. but no xbl. |
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for the gals
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Just,
something really creative, doesn't really matter-just getting along really well... 
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Topic:
JSH crushes - part 2
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Im starting to get crushed girl I been crushin' you a long time  
Lawlz. I saw this, and then looked at the pikkk... *sigh* ___ LET'S DO IT. xD |
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Hey Ladies
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needs a new picture again *koff*agreed*koff* |
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Two Hillbillys
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My friend Laura told me that one..
xDDD |
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Topic:
What's on my mind
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poop.
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of course
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Wow. I hate when that
happens.. and then yer boyfriend goes over to them and threatens to kill them if they ever talk to yew again?!? *sigh* I hate that.. 
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Topic:
Troubleshooting Beer
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That's amazing.
Too bad beer tastes like shxt. Try vodka. -no chasers, no mixes- DAMN STRAIGHT.  
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UMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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COFFEE GOOD hazel nut YUMMMMMMM GOOD MORNING ALL
ANOTHER HAZELNUT ADDICT HERE!
And here..
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sex
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xD
This is so absurd. xDDDDD sexsexsexsexsex |
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Topic:
JSH crushes - part 2
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Well, that's awful
sad to hear. xDD |
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Topic:
JSH crushes - part 2
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@obillyo-nice pikkk. xDDDD I have a crush. 
And I have red hair?
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