Just testing.....*fingers crossed*

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Where Seperate Fades

In a place
Where candles lit
Darkness fades
From where we sit,
Just you and I
Alone right here
Heart to heart
Without a fear.

Speak to me
And voice your heart
Show me dear
What you impart,
Speak the wonders
Held inside
Voice your pain
That seeks to hide.

Share your soul
As passions rise
And bear your heart
With tears you've cried.

I give to you
What seems not much
And share with love
My heart as such.
I'll take from you
Those tears you've cried
And mend the soul
What's torn inside.

As candles melt
The flames are snuffed
Along with tears
The pain is crushed.

Just you and I
Within the dark
A flame begins
From nurtured spark
Passion seeks
From where it hides
Within our love
New life resides.

Fadedspirit 11/4/2008

Beautiful write.

Excellent write. Wisdom come by words spoken in care.

You capture the spirit well my friend. Excellent write.

Thank you Mystique, I'm glad you liked it.

Very nice Robert. Good to see you again friend.

Nice write d4tc.

Excellent write will6 and welcome back.

It's too bad people can't see others for who they are, people. cheers.

A fun read and I bet a fun write as well. Nice write iam4u.

Thanks for visiting Pathnine and thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked this write. I don't think it's nit picky at all. You're right in noticing that line, I thought I had edited it out.


Thank you MsWizard. Your thoughts are taken to heart as your comments are felt in warmth.


Very true there iam4u. Thanks for dropping by.

Mine was pretty good.

Howdy Ya know abusing that brick wall will upset the voices. Just an observation though.

Eh....Mine's just startin

Now there's two fantasies I like to flush.....lol

Uh... no, they're ganging up on me and kicking my butt

I'm in the house arguing with the voices in my head.

Thank you directandwrite, I am honored by your reply.

Thanks HockeyChick, I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks iam4u.

Thanks oracle_at_delphi and welcome to our little corner of Mingle2.

Epiphany

It's never really known
What's had until it's gone,
Yet well perceived in lesson
What's wrong is what is taught.

Perhaps a gain is ruined
Or a love that seemed to fade
Bears depressing moods
While I bow my head in shame.

Elsewhere in the obstinate
Something burrows deep and dark
A meditative journey
Serves to light a spark.

When did I ever purchase
What's thought is mine to keep?
What ever made me trust
An acceptance in defeat?

The pain is never mortal
A lesson's never cheap
What's paid in full by teardrops
Deceived me from victory.

The course for me is clear
As I seek an inner light
Treading through the crystal
That snuffs my outward night.

Breeze procuring whispers
Call for me to yield
Understanding is the key
For me again to feel.

Imparting with this wisdom
Established is my cause
Embellished by a truth
As I stand aloof in awe.

I close my eyes
In restful sleep
What ached my heart
Now turns to flee
Angels of mercy
Comfort and keep
Each heart that's bound
And found to weep.

Fadedspirit 11/1/2008