If you are in your 30s or 40s and writing like that, then it is likely we will see you still in the 70s or 80s group just as single as now. People are not interested in deciphering what an adult male should have written for someone of his age group, but instead wrote like a middle school drop-out. No one worth positively impressing is going to be positively impressed with what you wrote.

Are you expecting them to say, "Hey, did you see that hot illiterate guy over there? I want to do him!"

Seriously, write all of your notes into Microsoft Word and turn on all of the grammar, spelling, syntax features and then make all possible corrections prior to posting your notes anywhere. They are not positively impressing anyone to want to date you or even to hookup with you.

GET A PROFESSIONAL PHOTOGRAPHER and stop using crappy cameras to take disturbing photos. Seriously, the goal is not to scare away people before they read that poorly written note.

Respectfully,
B