Community > Posts By > chrystar72
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The Poet
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i love poems and novellas and this seems to read like a novella. i have tried my hand at writing a few times and im no expert or crtique but your punctuation could be a little better?
keep it up you have the spark of literary prose:) |
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WHAT ARE YOU READING NOW
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the works of william faulkner.
very...dark. but before that it was "Zombie CSU" good stuff to know if you want to become a zombie forensic investigator..lol |
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Kicked in the Leg
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i didnt think stuff like that happened anymore..lol and it only happened on leave it to beaver or happy days.
wow..i just aged myself..lol |
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of course he's happy!! look at that huge smile behind that huge moustache..lol
im new i guess i better tread lightly..here's my ? why does it say "evaporated milk" on the can and when you open it..theres milk in it...it should be empty..right? |
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well hellooo there..lol
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nice.. very good...you made me laugh..
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well hellooo there..lol
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i guess i should temper myself...sorry..lol thanks for the welcome.
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I'm sinning
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eat with no guilt..guilt adds pounds.lol
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well hellooo there..lol
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just saying hi..i hope to meet some nice ladies..sooner than later..lol much love;)
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