thank you very much! i really appreciate that

hey guys please critique me... wondering if these r interesting to ne one but myself

feel the saddness and pain

as i write my thoughts on the wall

they come to life like once before

when i lived them and the world began to fall

friends and lovers, i once had too

but now they are just pen marks,

on this open, empty, white wall



and as the walls begin to fill

and seem to be more black than white

someone walked in the room

and everything became snow white

a new world right here

and a clean slate, with which to write



after seeing all that pain

and receiving a whole new wall to fill

i thought this gift deserved something more

than dark thoughts from and upward hill

so i'll fill this wall up one more time

but with colors of blue yellow and teal



so see my world how u choose

but know the words that i have said

can only be seen from within my head

for my walls are mine to see



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Definatly new to this, not completely sold on it, but i thought id give this intro ne way. music lover and an art lover. and completely addicted to all sports. hit me up sometime. let me know if this site is really worth bein on. just curious i guess

hey ne one left out there thats still working with art? just wantin to talk some about it, see if theres ne girls that r seriously into it. i'm a painter myself.

any girls left around here? lookin for someone real