Maybe a broader head? From the front, the legs kind of take most of the visual real estate.

I see. I don't have much experience with Dark Basic. How is it in terms of language?

Do you have an engine built already?

I suppose that's a very conservative approach to it. Definitely excited to see some screen shots!

Which is indeed a boon, owning your own servers has its ups and downs as well. What I'm trying to get at is that hosting programs such as Steam, XBLIG, Android Market, etc pays for itself. It costs minimal to sign up, if anything at all. And for a fair cut of the gross price, you get basically a small amount of advertisement, and potentially even more via word of mouth through the service. If you intend to make money off of the game, you'd be doing yourself a great disservice not to use these mediums on top of your own methods of sale.

Well the benefit to say, XBox Live Indie Games is that you have direct frontage for your game. Much with the same for Windows Phone Series, Android, iPhone, etc. Yes, you still have to advertise, but you don't have to worry about hosting and you always have a chance of "off the street" trials.

Oh, I see now. Sorry about that. What platforms are you releasing on?

Well, if the hunter is somewhat of a scavenger, why not split the snout into two, and have a massive lower jaw? Or two jaws, but a lone jaw would be more powerful/intimidating. This way it can still defend itself and hold objects, or hold two objects, making them more efficient.

Also what genre of game is it?

You might want to change the lower half of its form a little. Either make his feet bigger, or longer legs with more arc. If you look from the front and side; while standing idle they have a high chance of falling on their face. Longer legs with them pushed forward up to the front of the rib cage more would also added the benefit of clawing while leaping (like a raptor) and running faster (longer gait).

Otherwise, it looks good!