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blackout poetry
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What a lovely set of words you've got there.
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Bullet in the Mirror
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What a good poem.
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the feeding
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God this is refreshing, thanks for that.
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tranquility
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This took me by surprise. A good surprise of course.
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Topic:
Hogan's
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I completely understand this, it speaks to the me that formed a few years ago. Perfect.
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The Dump
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Once again, thanks for the kind words.
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south of the sun
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An effective choice of words, bravo!
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Thank you, this was wonderful. A nice breath of fresh air.
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The Dump
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The girl's florescent smile
Spoke of times we forgot to talk about, The days of gallantry and Caramelized kisses. Not that we didn't remember them. My mother would sometimes bleach the sheets Of my twin-sized bed, Missing the dot of Wisteria crayola I drove into it's whiteness Til my crayon broke. It wasn't a very good color anyways. I'm waiting to see if whistling 'Smackwater Jack' Will keep my five year collection of Old buttons from being thrown into the Mile deep dump That is my life. At least it's a good song. |
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New Town
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Wow, incredibly enjoyed.
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Boo
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Boo
Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. Nobody Knows Where the Good Men Have gone. Boo Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. Not Sure if People Care for Swing sets And Photo Clippings. Boo Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. Cathy's Missing From the Church Choir This Morning. Boo Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. Mark Left the Girl With a Babe In her arms. Boo Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. Forget about the Knife Come to Bed Dear. Boo Ra Ra Ra Boo Ra Ra. |
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I wasn't really sure what I was writing about either. But I think that was what it was for. Thanks for the words.
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Nobody reads short stories.
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I understand. I think everybody does, in their own way. Thanks for something new, was missing your stuff.
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Nostalgia.
Yeah. That's the word. The one on the Tippy tip tip Of my tongue. This delicate porcelain In my Cupped hand Feels cheap. Wait, where was I going with this? Not sure Just Somewhere. A squelching noise As I twist the lid off Of the OK brand of Something or other. What was I writing about? Nggggh... Forgot. The girl didn't laugh at my jokes. Yet they were funny. I was sure of it. That bit of wall looks interesting, I think I'll stare at it for an hour Or two. Can't you just shut up and let me think? Now Here I go. |
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Pig Tails and Ponies
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I just got a flash of Dr. Seuss.
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“The Race”
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I like it.
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Bow
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It's like emotion painted across a page, love it.
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Chalkboards To Erase
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Has voice, which I love.
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Girl
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Very thought provoking.
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Rough
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I'm sitting here, after a 20 hour flight, laughing. Not sure if that's what you intended, but thanks for it anyways. Caught me a bit off guard.
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