Topic:
Please review my profile.
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Hi, hope this looks better than instructions, but keep in mind I would like to help. Your words sound great. Now, why not add a picture of you and your pet, friends or you and your family?
Wording: I would skip the words "just" in the second and seventh sentence, add spaces behind each sentence and change "humour" to "humor". I would also change "Are you that somebody special?" to "Would you be the one?" See below. Everything else looks good. " Hi.I'm looking for that one special woman for dating that hopefully leads to a long term relationship. About me I love classic rock,good restaurants,concerts and movies. My ideal match would be someone who loves to laugh, has a good sense of humor and doesn't take life too seriously. I am now waiting for that one special somebody to come into my life. Would you be the one? If you are than I am waiting to hear from you." |
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