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Topic:
"Halfway There"
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 Thanks MsTeddy!
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Topic:
"Halfway There"
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[maleah]..I like to think Im a heady Merlot
 Thanks for reading
[Tammy] Thanks girl, you got my bloody heart 
[kc003] Thanks buddy!
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Zeno's Paradoxes
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There is also one where you can never cross a room if you first stop halfway, then go half the next distance and so forth. The idea is a convergent series, but I believe that the LOGIC is flawed. Of course you can cross a room, overtake a tortise and so on.
I say let them die in the past with Zeno
Sorry, but these always annoyed the s*** out of me, nice topic smiless! 
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Topic:
"Halfway There"
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An exquisite image,
one so held on high one that was better, made me feel all the better. My hell imagined and all-seen was better than all that'd been better better than that ol' circuit I robbed all the stinking MindWay I didn't have an emotion to spend only poison to waste & fester leave everyone wanting & burnt Do I stay or skirt it? --Here's what came out of The Bin, Here's what matters for just Today: I lived in worlds where blenders Felt Love The clouds were misogynistic, Hence...they only rained on girls Every Desire came wrapped in a glove that burned with a heat you wouldn't couldn't dursn't ever really miss Destroy your Image and you really destroy your Self You can manifest My Hell, the blenders want to introduce you and your friends to better VCRs and Bread machines on the loose run while you can, run like it's not even the end.....-- |
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Topic:
Things
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Not a thing that can be easily lost, but you are right, it's why we all search for each other...to lose that 'lonely thing".
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7 days from tomorrow...(kc)
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Very nice maleah, good luck!
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Topic:
"Efficiency"
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powerful images, great write 
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Topic:
"Efficiency"
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  darn it there you go again LOL mentioning that "s" word again!
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Topic:
what do you believe?
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Promises, promises
Nail me to a cross and I'll promise you ANYTHING you want to hear Just being a smartass
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Topic:
Perceptions of Ponderance
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I'm glad you came back, this one is very mixed for me....which is weird
I feel lost & confused through it all, nice feeling , and then the end snaps me back. Lesson learned Faded, and great write
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Topic:
"Efficiency"
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nicely done....
visually efficient... 
Thanks kc003
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"Doll"
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Welcome to the forum!
Forever frozen, forever lost...sounds like a great time, nice song!
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Topic:
What is despair?
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What is despair? Is it this feeling of emptiness that resides in my heart? Is it the very darkness that is weighing down my spirit. They tell me, "Get your hopes and spirits up." and yet, it seems utterly impossible from the stillness in my seemingly empty chest. I ask a simple prayer: Please, remove these memories that cause me pain and and sorrow. . .
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On a Bench, In The City
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Yo kc003, I do remember a time when "life" used to be different, when the goals were so far removed from what they are today. Maybe it's just a phase in our evolution,maybe this is the real end...who knows.
Flow and style, ryhme and reason....great write
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Topic:
"Efficiency"
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Hey man you know I dig your voice....keep on speaking. But shouldn't you be studying right now?
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Topic:
"Efficiency"
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[maleah] Thank You, catch a your breath like different
[artgurl] Thank You too, it's always the ones I think people will never like that they most enjoy....wierd Thanks again
That just reminded me that we can't anticipate our audience My painting turns to crap the minute I try to 'please an audience' because I shut down the creative process. We cannot serve two masters so we must remain true to ourselves and our art form ... yeah wierd ... and cool
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Topic:
Piddly Poo
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Is this the drawer in the kitchen or in the mind?  Very nice
yes, and the last few boxes to pack..so, you have a kitchen drawer too..hmm Nice to hear from you
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Topic:
Piddly Poo
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Is this the drawer in the kitchen or in the mind?
Very nice
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Topic:
My Blood
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I drag The ball and chain Wrapped tightly Around my ankle It bleeds With every move I make Cutting deeply into the gaping wound Skin hangs In layers around my feet Watching the colors change From purple to blue to yellow Like a painful sunset And I drag it Despite the pain Despite the tears Despite the crys for help It is me now A flesh of my flesh Intertwined with my veins A bloody he'll of a mess I gingerly swipe my fingers Through the blood And taste It brings solace My blood It brings the calmness To my day Tammy  
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Passion And Punishment
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Hey There....I really like this one, especially your use of "archaic" words: doth, hath, etc. I had a college poetry class and I used the word "amongst", the teacher told me not to use it because it is too old fashioned.
Sorry for the rant, great write
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