Topic: HELL
jerbear1966's photo
Fri 01/12/07 01:56 PM
No earth or sea nor sky above
Only chains of darkness without love
Where time has no meaning
Only vague memories of paradise
When the grass was green and bluest skies
Now my soul is vexed with lies
Where time has no meaning
No peace or joy nor happiness
Just hateful sounds and grimaces
Where time has no meaning
Screams of torment and suffering
And wails the woes of those ailing
Where time has no meaning
The demons dance to our dismay
For we will never see the light of day
Where time has no meaning

michael1313's photo
Fri 01/12/07 02:02 PM
oh,th pain of it all,to live life going thru hell...

sad, but good write...

no photo
Fri 01/12/07 03:55 PM
vex, good uses of word, i use it all the time, surprisingly, not alot of
folks have heard it before. Anyhow, sometimes i get vex at life among
other things.....lol

Great wording! Keep it up jerbear-niceeeee!

jerbear1966's photo
Fri 01/12/07 04:39 PM
Thanks Michael
And Peachimon, I like to keep things simple too! You are a peach to be
cherished!

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 01/12/07 05:06 PM
good one