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My Bearer
Mirro, mirro, look into the mirro Look into the mirro and tell me what you see Pass threw the hallways, Pass threw the tonnels and follow the path that leads. Don't be shackled, don't be bound... Hope, love, happiness and life can be found. Meet me on the other side, I will be there with open arms... Can you hear me, listen to my call.... Shhhh, be quiet, don't say a word; listen to my voice calling......shhhhhh! A wispher in the darkness calls out, Bearer, bearer...you must stay on this side... No one will be premitted to pass this way, No one will be able to enter or leave. Bearer, Bearer, listen to my voice, meet me on the other side, I'm waiting to take your hand. Pass threw the darkness, Pass threw the dried up sand, Pass threw the desert and take my reaching hand. Loneliness ends here, No more anger dwells, No more fears. For the gate welcomes all....shhhh, listen well! Can you hear me? Look into the mirro. What do you see? I see you, my bearer staring back at me. I see you, a wonderful person who is free. By: mb (peachimon) ******* I really had a thing for someone, so i wrote a peom for him ***** maybe we are all lost sometimes, be it us or them ***** maybe we all call on someone **** if they hear our call is another thing **** no matters,it is all part of life, and we cannot help but embrace it all... ****************************************** |
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nice poem Peachimon...
not to be harsh...but a couple of typos... needs an "R" at th end of Mirror...lol... but a good poem,please keep writing!!! |
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GOOD POEM GIRL
M, Shame on you on the typo's thing humm you never have them lol |
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AWESOME MB AWESOME!! I am blown away!! diggin your words gurl!!
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if I could have emailed her she would have it in private,
but I'm too old to email her... she has it set for 44 years old...I'm 45...lol... |
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mirror, and whispher, ooops, my bad, i noticed afterwards. Oh, well,
what are words? Can we really define them by spelling or meaning? Oh, well. Did i put 44? ooops..... |
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Thanks for the nice words ChubbyCherubPoet, i really appreciate that
coming from u. U have so much tallent, too. When i come here,it all good! And i love it all. Thanks! |
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thanx for writing...
typo's and all.... just picking on you...lol... |
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U better watch michael, if u want nice, u have to be nice...no picking,
i am peachimon, not a peach tree....lol |
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just checking to see how firm th peaches are...lol...
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Very good! Keep writing....
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oh, they are firm alright, don't think i haven't been watching u,
too---u are a bad ass with nice words, sometimes a Mr. Hyde nah? |
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thanks, jerbear. I liked urs, too!
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well Peachimon...glad to see you are paying attention...lol...
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Michael, be not fooled, looks are deceiving....lol...i look alot younger
than i really am....heehhe |
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