Topic: My Bearer
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Fri 01/12/07 11:21 AM
My Bearer

Mirro, mirro, look into the mirro
Look into the mirro and tell me what you see

Pass threw the hallways,
Pass threw the tonnels and follow the path that leads.

Don't be shackled, don't be bound...
Hope, love, happiness and life can be found.

Meet me on the other side, I will be there with open arms...
Can you hear me, listen to my call....

Shhhh, be quiet, don't say a word;
listen to my voice calling......shhhhhh!

A wispher in the darkness calls out,
Bearer, bearer...you must stay on this side...

No one will be premitted to pass this way,
No one will be able to enter or leave.

Bearer, Bearer, listen to my voice,
meet me on the other side, I'm waiting to take your hand.

Pass threw the darkness,
Pass threw the dried up sand,
Pass threw the desert and take my reaching hand.

Loneliness ends here,
No more anger dwells,
No more fears.
For the gate welcomes all....shhhh, listen well!

Can you hear me? Look into the mirro.
What do you see?
I see you, my bearer staring back at me.
I see you, a wonderful person who is free.

By: mb (peachimon)

******* I really had a thing for someone, so i wrote a peom for him
***** maybe we are all lost sometimes, be it us or them ***** maybe
we all call on someone **** if they hear our call is another thing
**** no matters,it is all part of life, and we cannot help but embrace
it all... ******************************************

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Fri 01/12/07 02:09 PM
nice poem Peachimon...

not to be harsh...but a couple of typos...

needs an "R" at th end of Mirror...lol...

but a good poem,please keep writing!!!

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Fri 01/12/07 02:58 PM
GOOD POEM GIRL

M, Shame on you on the typo's thing humm you never have them lol

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Fri 01/12/07 03:03 PM
AWESOME MB AWESOME!! I am blown away!! diggin your words gurl!!

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Fri 01/12/07 03:14 PM
if I could have emailed her she would have it in private,
but I'm too old to email her...
she has it set for 44 years old...I'm 45...lol...

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Fri 01/12/07 03:34 PM
mirror, and whispher, ooops, my bad, i noticed afterwards. Oh, well,
what are words? Can we really define them by spelling or meaning? Oh,
well. Did i put 44? ooops.....

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Fri 01/12/07 03:36 PM
Thanks for the nice words ChubbyCherubPoet, i really appreciate that
coming from u. U have so much tallent, too. When i come here,it all
good! And i love it all. Thanks!

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Fri 01/12/07 04:00 PM
thanx for writing...
typo's and all....
just picking on you...lol...

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Fri 01/12/07 04:13 PM
U better watch michael, if u want nice, u have to be nice...no picking,
i am peachimon, not a peach tree....lol

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Fri 01/12/07 04:23 PM
just checking to see how firm th peaches are...lol...

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Fri 01/12/07 05:46 PM
Very good! Keep writing....

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Fri 01/12/07 06:11 PM
oh, they are firm alright, don't think i haven't been watching u,
too---u are a bad ass with nice words, sometimes a Mr. Hyde nah?

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Fri 01/12/07 06:12 PM
thanks, jerbear. I liked urs, too!

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Sat 01/13/07 05:32 AM
well Peachimon...glad to see you are paying attention...lol...

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Sat 01/13/07 08:33 AM
Michael, be not fooled, looks are deceiving....lol...i look alot younger
than i really am....heehhe