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its so nice for people to give me a laugh at 3 am...it wakes me up. 
We do what we can here at JSH. 
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Are you Vanilla Ice's little brother...?
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the reckoning
as the wind whipped horizontal rain through the broken trees that looked like claws grasping though deep charred colored rivers, the lone figure defied the onslaught... slowly, and deliberately he came as floating on his own fog, his malevolence (sp) moved him on. toward us he came....gliding through the broken stalks of corn from the previous year, dried and withered as he was, for he was........ |
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Are you Vanilla Ice's little brother...?
yea they call me lil ice |
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Are you Vanilla Ice's little brother...?
yea they call me lil ice I have officially left this thread... |
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Are you Vanilla Ice's little brother...?
yea they call me lil ice LOL, hello lil ice
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i'm coming for you barbara!
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the reckoning as the wind whipped horizontal rain through the broken trees that looked like claws grasping though deep charred colored rivers, the lone figure defied the onslaught... slowly, and deliberately he came as floating on his own fog, his malevolence (sp) moved him on. toward us he came....gliding through the broken stalks of corn from the previous year, dried and withered as he was, for he was........  
Woooo Hoooo I like this one...CHEERS 
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That poem was unbelievable. Such depth! Such spirit! Such grace and dignity! Wonderful paradigm with the duality of "cum". I was moved.
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Edited by
darkowl1
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Fri 03/28/08 12:13 AM
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That poem was unbelievable. Such depth! Such spirit! Such grace and dignity! Wonderful paradigm with the duality of "cum". I was moved. omg!!!
hi jen, and thankyou baby  
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and if we're really good, mr. hanky will leave us some fiber in our toilet christmas morning.....
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That poem was unbelievable. Such depth! Such spirit! Such grace and dignity! Wonderful paradigm with the duality of "cum". I was moved. you kill me biker, have another 500 yen piece. if the dollar keeps slipping I am going to have to start throwing good ole greenbacks to ya
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Thank you, thank you. I will be here all week. Got 5 pro writers on here looking at that poem goin "Huh? WTF?" I feel your pain.
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I have only wrote 3 poems I damm sure aint no writer
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Edited by
darkowl1
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Fri 03/28/08 12:24 AM
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gemini, your poem isn't bad it's just different. there is no bad efforts, it your attitude that people are ribbing you for. if it had music to it, there's no telling where it might go. good luck to you, and your endevours, and don't give up. never give up.
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I was waiting for briank to tell him to put some backbone into it.
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and if we're really good, mr. hanky will leave us some fiber in our toilet christmas morning.....
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Yeah maybe. Just over my head.
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