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One sided love isn't very nice,
It's like playing a game with a one-sided dice, or only having stickers on one side of the rubik's cube... sorta like watching T.V. without the T.V. tube. One sided love is like a one sided mirror, that you can't see clear, It's like one sided toilet paper, that on the other side it'll smear, sorta like a picture frame, that only has one edge, a child's toy that they piece won't fit, cause you only have a one sided wedge. One sided love... well, it's like only using one hand... only using one leg when you get up and stand, it makes no more sense then a one sided glove... pshh... One sided love. you can keep it No better then stepping in a pile of one sided dog ****. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild |
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One-Sided Love
((((( Vicki ))))) An Ocean lay between Sky dark with Gray Longing for his hold Stories to be told Yesturday forgotten Memories just a fade Speak to me If only in my dreams..... Empty is my mind Lonely our my thoughts One-Sided Highway I Pray for Hope..... Shelter I search Blossom's of Spring Food for thought Soul Speaks.... Look upon the Sky Petals in full bloom Beauty of One Beauty of Two A Garden of Hope, Faith & Love One-Sided as the story goes Remember my Child As the Garden Grows Always & Forever Your Heart & Soul Home is where the Love Grows...... |
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((((Denise)))) ((((Ben))))
Well done to both of you from different angles! Hope from one and synicism from the other... I would expect nothing less! |
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Lol... which ones which?
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Lol... which ones which? LOL! Only you FC only you! |
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Ok, here's a challenge for Den he said I could make public...
(of course, anyone is welcome to write about the topic) all are welcome to try, lol, please! Den, I challenge you to: The Elephant who couldn't afford Peanuts! any format's fine... but I like rhyming poems. lol. |
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lol, I'll attend to BOTH of you when I get back. Gotta run for a bit
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It may have been one sided
And, true, I played the fool But for a while I was a happy fool And I held to role well It may have been one sided And so I had to leave As you no longer wanted me But I lived all the same It may have been one sided But at least I loved And I won't give that up for you or anyone I learned heartbreak but I think I came out ahead In the end |
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Challenge since I can't come up with anything myself: Killer dust bunnies (can you tell I've been reading Stephen King:)
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It may have been one sided And, true, I played the fool But for a while I was a happy fool And I held to role well It may have been one sided And so I had to leave As you no longer wanted me But I lived all the same It may have been one sided But at least I loved And I won't give that up for you or anyone I learned heartbreak but I think I came out ahead In the end Nice write Kate... thank you again! |
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All very nice
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Ok, here's a challenge for Den he said I could make public... (of course, anyone is welcome to write about the topic) all are welcome to try, lol, please! Den, I challenge you to: The Elephant who couldn't afford Peanuts! any format's fine... but I like rhyming poems. lol. Here ya go! Peanuts! Peanuts! I must have more peanuts! I work all night walking around; these kids can’t tell a smile from a frown! I stand on my back legs for a handful of nuts, traveling from town to town! They make me get down on my stomach and beg for food! I hope whoever invented this idea got squashed, for being rude! I need to make some calls; I’m ready to be a free agent! This pay is terrible, working conditions suck, and I’m tired of this tent! Just wait till the next time they want to see me spit water out my nose! Every damn one of those snotty little brats is about to get hosed! © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. |
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I will bring my umbrella with me next time,lol
GOOD POEM, Thanks Den... |
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Here's my take on the elephant's plight...........
Striding forward the English gent Spying an elephant backward bent "I say old chap what ails thee" Elephant replies I'm doing tricks hoping to get peanuts for free" "Now look here chap" said the portly fellow Quit playing around,stop being yellow" How else can I get my treats, if I don't perform some amazing feat" "Peanuts have soared in price I must perform if I want anything nice Simba the lion jumps through hoops He gets presents in large scoops And as for Sally the seal Her just rewards are such a deal" "You need a plan" the gentleman said "Come over here and stand on your head" "Who do you think I am said the elephant some kind of demented sycophant?" " I stand in the corner and pretend to be shy This trick of mine has always got me by" "Not now it wouldn't" the gentleman said Find something else that pays "Kids are so much smarter these days!" |
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Very nice add, Miss Bonnie....thanks
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heart Very nice add, Miss Bonnie....thanksflowerforyou
Hi iam, how's it going for you? |
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Soon to be back driving and not on these happy pages much...I hope YOUR doing great and tell Michael I said hi..
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Nice writes (((Den and Bonny)
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Peanuts! Peanuts! I must have more peanuts! © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. ha ha... excellent Den. way to weave the words! |
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Here's my take on the elephant's plight........... Very well written BonnyMiss... (or who ever you are) lol. Still haven't figured it out... but you never give me any clues! Anyway. I loved the angle and direction you took with this, a very compelling story. imaginative! congrats! |
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