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Topic: A void
tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Thu 03/27/08 01:30 PM
i can not touch for i wouldnt feel my outside skin as tough as steel a broken heart in tune with none i can not change the things ..undone i lay awake most every night peer in the past with such insight i walk through life alone today this empty feeling's come to stay i do not want to love again i lost my only true best friend..... writings from the tombs.....

pilgrimandpagan Joined Fri 01/04/08 Posts: 1118	Thu 03/27/08 01:32 PM
lovely

Wanderingflower Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 16	Thu 03/27/08 01:35 PM
Nicely written

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 03/27/08 01:38 PM
nice write!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/27/08 01:39 PM


tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Thu 03/27/08 01:53 PM
i think the fingers and mind type these out i am just an innocent bystander ....thank you..and i dont even want to write poetry ...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 03/27/08 01:54 PM
i think the fingers and mind type these out i am just an innocent bystander ....thank you..and i dont even want to write poetry ... Sometimes we don't have a choice in the matter, when the sould needs an out words are a wonderful thing when used properly. Thanks for sharing with us!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/27/08 01:55 PM
i think the fingers and mind type these out i am just an innocent bystander ....thank you..and i dont even want to write poetry ... lol... well you just let the mind and fingers continue to do the walking so to say,,, Love reading thier thoughts

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Thu 03/27/08 01:58 PM
Tomb, your mind and fingers obviously went somewhere very deep. I like this write.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 03/27/08 02:12 PM Edited by Differentkindofwench on Thu 03/27/08 02:14 PM
i can not touch for i wouldnt feel my outside skin as tough as steel a broken heart in tune with none i can not change the things ..undone i lay awake most every night peer in the past with such insight i walk through life alone today this empty feeling's come to stay i do not want to love again i lost my only true best friend..... writings from the tombs..... I do so love these tomb's of script, but, son, gotta tell ya, I think you've slipped. You're poetry: hell now, that's flawless, but the heart of the tomb; well, ya act like its jawless. Tomb, you have love you naturally hold. When ya finish your grief, give it a chance to roll. It's in that jawless heart you keep shuttin' down. A wench respectfully waitin for the day you EMERGE from those Tennessee Tombs...........

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 03/27/08 02:48 PM
I'd a kinda like to see you emerge too... (((tomb)))

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