Topic: The Old Man, Part One, Two, Three. and Four | |
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I went for a walk
I was enjoying the summer breeze smiling as I watched the birds sing in the trees Then in the corner of my eye I saw an old man he was just sitting there with his head in both hands Puzzeled by his demeanor I approched and asked are you ok sir are you reflecting on your past Slowly he looked up he stared in my eyes I was almost overwhelmed it was like he was reading my mind He opened his mouth and he began to speak I knew you would come you are the one that I seek He said I am the last Knight and with the edge of my sword I have made wrongs right As you walk your path there will come a day the voice of wisdom will speak listen to her, she will help you find your way Then he stood up he looked so familiar it was like seeing my reflection when I look in a mirror He told me things that I would begin to see but take heart and don't worry because this is ment to be By Daniel 03/09/08 Part one The Old Man, Part two I was awe struck by his story and what he revealed to me for this man seem to know my entire history He reached to his side and unsheathed his sword he said kneel down Daniel for this is to be yours The sword seemed to shimmer it had a soft amber glow I could sense that it's purity was as white as snow He turned the sword around and placed it in my right hand within an instant in another place I did stand As I held this sword I felt the power it possessed my heart began pounding inside my chest I looked around for the old man that was there but I couldn't find him he wasn't anywhere The air began to crackle the sword seemed to come alive my spirit began to float up into the sky I heard voices mysteries were revealed things I didn't know were no longer concealed In the next instant I was back where I first stood the old man had wrote his name on a pieace of driftwood He had traveled from the future to me in the past I finally understood who he was a last By Daniel 03/09/08 Part two To be continued... I hope all reading this will enjoy so far.. The Old Man, Part Three As I stood there after reading his name I knew from this moment on I would never be the same With sword still in hand it called out to me it began to shine ever so brightly It told me it's name in my mind so clear all I need do is think it and it will appear Still trying to absorb everything I was shown I thought so intensely as I walked my way home When I got home and opened the door my strength had escaped me I just fell on the floor I had dreams and visions of things yet to come like the sound of music when you beat on a drum When I awoke I called my swords name from the mists of time to my side it came As I held my sword it was now no mystery it was my very life force an extention of me It said prepair yourself Daniel for in the comming years the things you will see will make you shed many tears But fear not Daniel and keep your heart strong for it's on this journey that you do belong By Daniel 03/19/08 The Old Man, Part Four The very next day all alone in my thoughts all of this to take in was a bit of a shock Such a heavy responsibility had been placed on me waiting for me to be born from the begining of eternity I must dawn my armour for the time is drawing near to comfort the meek and dry their tears When you are weak I will lift you up I will show you the power of Heaven above With kind gentleness I will caress your soul because all of you are special I want you to know I am the last Knight I was chosen before birth I want everyone to know you all have true worth So when I see that you need someone who cares even when you don't want me I will still be there With love and kindness and all sencerity just so you will know the Old Man was me... By Daniel 03/26/08 |
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Your soul shines bright Daniel!
![]() ![]() I have something for you but need a bit to put myself in order... |
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Thank you Vicki.. nice compliment
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Fantastic write, I love it!
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Fantastic write, I love it! Thank you Kate, Ominous.. ![]() ![]() |
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Very Beautiful story....
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Thank you Wendy...
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Daniel this is an epic and an amazing one at that
Im pasting a song in your email because I cant post it here,but it is one of my favorites and this poem took me back to being a teenager and blasting what you're about to read through my speakers Now,you've brought back a memory,thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of heroic literature JT |
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Wed 03/26/08 03:18 PM
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Daniel this is an epic and an amazing one at that Im pasting a song in your email because I cant post it here,but it is one of my favorites and this poem took me back to being a teenager and blasting what you're about to read through my speakers Now,you've brought back a memory,thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of heroic literature JT JT, you more than honor me with your post.. it's you I should thank my friend.. Such an honor to have you as one.. Our gift is gift is free, and freely we give... I hope what we write, helps someone smile, you and I both know, we will go the extra mile.. Thank you JT Daniel |
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![]() (((((pkh))))) (((((MsTeddy))))) You both do me great honor.. thank you both so much.. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Told you I had something for you so here it is... my heart to yours
![]() On this walk I have been for so long Looking for one that does right wrong I have known our paths would cross I've tried not to let my life be a loss I see you there with a string in your hand Reaching to me across this great land When you came I was scared Your strong presence found me unprepared You have seen things and I have too Hang on tight our battle's not through We both live to aid all others Guide us through this dear sweet Father I know just what my life will be Taking a stand for eternity What we've seen made us who we are We may be tired but we still fight the war Though this war has not been won You no longer have to live it alone The sword you cary burns so bright Twas given to you as an end to the night Here we are on this journey You say to me "Do not fret and do not worry" God knew us both before we were born He knows us now though our bodies have been torn We don't have an option to say yes or no We are compelled to help it must be so Our wants and needs and selves put aside To do for others our arms spread wide I'm not a knight it is true For that honor was given to you I'm just a maiden who knows not of self Giving to others is my wealth I see in life what each is worth God knew you all even before birth All alive need someone that cares You need but ask we are there The maiden I am sees the knight that you be The woman I am knows the man I see |
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