Ok dont know how good this is so give me some feed back please..

With all the lovely words you had to say
then you went and broke my heart in such
a way But yet you knew the right words to
say to make me still want to stay
Yet I still wonder if I was strong enough
if I could have just walked away

For now I know I can just walk away
and never look back in such a way
With all the words you have to say
I know now I can just walk away
One day you may look back at the way
things were and think to yourself I
could have changed my ways and then somehow
make her want stay But i am too strong now
to even give you the time of day
I hope one of these days you will realize
just what a mistake you had made For you
actually had it quite made with all the
love I had for you to make you want change
in such a way

For now I know you are too set in your ways
that you will never change in such a way
So now im set out to bay For now I wonder
if I will ever find the right man to love me
in the right way to make me just want to stay.

3/24/08
By:Shannon
This poem is dedicated to my ex bf Randy

Sass it is good to write our feelings out,
and you are doing a good job of exspressing yourself!

Heres to becoming stronger people and to finding a truer
love in our lives!

Good write!! When you write from yrou heart the words will always be felt!!!

Sass that is beautiful!

I'm glad you were able to get it out. I'm also glad you found your innner strength and peace about it! What a gift you have!

When words are from the heart they touch anothers soul

It was wonderful right from the heart

ty teddy I felt so good to get that out...It made me realize that I should have left him two yrs ago..but instead I left him just last yr...but hey he is out of my life now that his cell dont work..well of course you pay the bill maybe it would...hehehehe

that is very true mteagle and im learning now just how to express myself here in this thread of poetry...If it wasnt for Daniel to give me a push I would never have wrote any poems in here...So I basically owe it to him for the push he gave me..

ty so much lurch's_sister but I truely owe it to Daniel that has pushed and encouraged me to write like this..or i would have never had the guts to post any of my poetry in here..

thats very true txsgal...everyones poems touches my soul when I read them

ty pkh I am starting to get the feel for this thread and reading yalls poems inspire me to write my own...and I thank Daniel the most for giving me the extra push and encouragement to post mine to yall...

Sass, Daniel is an amazing person and he inspires many... me included. Keep going and drwa strength from all around as we love you!

awww...thanks your too sweet

it does not matter weather or not people thing it is good
keep singing from the heart and your song will find the right audience

write for you and no one else will question it nor should they
i know acceptance is nice but, sometimes just the release
is worth the effort

ty kc that is very true but in this case I just wanted to make sure there wasnt anything that needed to be improved or taken out

i think that all the time...oh! you were talking about the write...sorry

awww beautiful poem my sweet gal-pal

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,, You have touched so many with your words, not even knowing it,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm you keep writing for your words flow from your heart & soul,,,

If what YOU say is from YOU, then ITS ALL GOOD,,,,any and ALL....Because we are all here as FRIENDS not in competetion
with one another.
But to just read and try to FEEL another friends heart..

GOOD READ, and good POEM....

ty pretty lady

ty LaMom I am glad i can touch pll through my words...

ty iam4u and yes every poem I post comes straight from my heart...needless to say i have another that has been brewing but cant seem to get it out just yet but hopefully soon it will come out..