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Nightmare
Sometimes she sits alone in the dark Wondering where life will take her next To what degree of solitude she will run What will be the final undoing Of everything she's done And everything she's not Everything she could've been Before fear had her caught In her lonely little atmosphere Where she lies in wait for death Only hoping all the while She'll soon catch her breath And not let the demons bury her deep In the silent abyss where her secrets do keep Far in the depths of her innermost nightmare Where the child that was once her Is now staring effortlessly back Mocking the woman she's become So afraid of the light, letting the darkness seep in Through every crack and crevice until night Has completely obliterated any hope of escape So what's left to do but lie in surrender And hope that the demons are unusually kind And spare her heart while they devour her mind ATU 2007 |
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nice
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wow that is good
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thanks you guys
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(((Embers))))
That was great! |
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BEAUTIFUL
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very good!
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Edited by
EtherealEmbers
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Sun 03/23/08 03:14 PM
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thanks Suz, Danny, Austin
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Brilliant write dear.This inner turmoil certainly is quite painful & enduringly haunting.I Luv'd it very much.Godspeed!CyPoet
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tyvm poet
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Sun 03/23/08 06:50 PM
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Not that you will say anything, since you ignore me, but I thought your poem was very good.. btw, this post will selfdestruct..
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very nice ((((embers))))
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Good poem and may all your demons come to your mind with love.
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Not that you will say anything, since you ignore me, but I thought your poem was very good.. btw, this post will selfdestruct.. a criticism and a compliment... not sure how to take that |
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ty OC and iam
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