Topic: Nightmare
EtherealEmbers's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:02 PM
Nightmare

Sometimes she sits alone in the dark
Wondering where life will take her next
To what degree of solitude she will run
What will be the final undoing
Of everything she's done
And everything she's not
Everything she could've been
Before fear had her caught
In her lonely little atmosphere
Where she lies in wait for death
Only hoping all the while
She'll soon catch her breath
And not let the demons bury her deep
In the silent abyss where her secrets do keep
Far in the depths of her innermost nightmare
Where the child that was once her
Is now staring effortlessly back
Mocking the woman she's become
So afraid of the light, letting the darkness seep in
Through every crack and crevice until night
Has completely obliterated any hope of escape
So what's left to do but lie in surrender
And hope that the demons are unusually kind
And spare her heart while they devour her mind

ATU 2007

david1972's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:05 PM
nice:cry:

johncarl's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:05 PM
wow that is good:heart:

EtherealEmbers's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:06 PM
flowerforyou thanks you guys flowerforyou

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Sun 03/23/08 03:12 PM
(((Embers))))

That was great! flowerforyou

cdanny47's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:12 PM
:smile: BEAUTIFUL

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Sun 03/23/08 03:13 PM
very good!:wink:

EtherealEmbers's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:13 PM
Edited by EtherealEmbers on Sun 03/23/08 03:14 PM
bigsmile thanks Suz, Danny, Austin flowerforyou

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Sun 03/23/08 03:14 PM
Brilliant write dear.This inner turmoil certainly is quite painful & enduringly haunting.I Luv'd it very much.Godspeed!CyPoetflowerforyou

EtherealEmbers's photo
Sun 03/23/08 03:17 PM
tyvm poet flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 03/23/08 06:49 PM
Edited by 2Btrue2One on Sun 03/23/08 06:50 PM
Not that you will say anything, since you ignore me, but I thought your poem was very good.. btw, this post will selfdestruct..

OrangeCat's photo
Sun 03/23/08 06:51 PM
very nice ((((embers))))flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 03/23/08 08:07 PM
:heart: Good poem and may all your demons come to your mind with love.:heart: flowerforyou drinker :wink: smokin

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Sun 03/23/08 08:11 PM

Not that you will say anything, since you ignore me, but I thought your poem was very good.. btw, this post will selfdestruct..


noway

a criticism and a compliment... not sure how to take that

EtherealEmbers's photo
Sun 03/23/08 08:12 PM
ty OC and iam flowerforyou

OrangeCat's photo
Sun 03/23/08 08:17 PM
:wink: flowerforyou

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Mon 03/24/08 05:43 AM
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