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the walls are closing in
no where left to run just waiting for the end not sure when it begun tired of making mistakes and never being right sick of trying and trying im giving up the fight no stregnth to move on not really sure i could give it all up sometimes i think i should nothing lies ahead just more hurt and pain with everything to lose and nothing more to gain you really really hurt me and its something i cant forgive the only thing you have to offer is a life i can not live hurts to walk away but theres nothing left to do its time to say goodbye no longer can i love you |
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it hurts, but f!?k him, you can do better anyway
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Well composed.
"...you really really hurt me and its something i cant forgive the only thing you have to offer is a life i can not live..." Takes me back to darker times and stirs up some reflection. Hope you feel a bit better after getting all that out. |
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Wow I wish I had your talent!
I am a Musician but I cannot write anything..lol |
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AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!I AM SURE SOOOOOOOOO MANY CAN RELATE TO THAT UNFORTUANTLY.KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND MOVE FORWARD. DO NOT LOOK BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanks
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WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW
TIME'S RUNNING OUT AINT NO MORE YOU CAN BORROW SO MANY PATHS WHICH ONE YOU GONNA FOLLOW WHAT WOULD YOU DO, IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW..... |
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WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW TIME'S RUNNING OUT AINT NO MORE YOU CAN BORROW SO MANY PATHS WHICH ONE YOU GONNA FOLLOW WHAT WOULD YOU DO, IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW..... id ask god for a little more time just one last reflection of my life in rewind id make happy for everything i made sad turn everything into good, which i had made bad love a little more, cry a little less and come to realize ive been truely blessed id dance in the rain, sing in the shower swim the deepest ocean, and climb the highest tower wake before dawn, and watch the sun rise say hello again to all of my goodbyes work a lot less, play a little more reopen some of those closed doors i stand for a moment and take it all in then id step forth, and let my journey begin |
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wow very nice all of them
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wow very nice all of them thanks |
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Thu 03/20/08 08:21 AM
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I respond to you
on this very day just take a moment to hear what I say Lift your head up stand tall and strong I will lend you my hand if you need help to carry on Never believe that it's all over if you need to cry I will lend you my shoulder I will help you Noel i'm here as a friend I want you to know a broken heart can mend I hope this helps you Noel I truly do.. Daniel |
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Edited by
tearsofblood666
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Thu 03/20/08 08:44 AM
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WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW TIME'S RUNNING OUT AINT NO MORE YOU CAN BORROW SO MANY PATHS WHICH ONE YOU GONNA FOLLOW WHAT WOULD YOU DO, IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW..... id ask god for a little more time just one last reflection of my life in rewind id make happy for everything i made sad turn everything into good, which i had made bad love a little more, cry a little less and come to realize ive been truely blessed id dance in the rain, sing in the shower swim the deepest ocean, and climb the highest tower wake before dawn, and watch the sun rise say hello again to all of my goodbyes work a lot less, play a little more reopen some of those closed doors i stand for a moment and take it all in then id step forth, and let my journey begin IF YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES YOU LIFE A NAKED TRUTH REVEALED DREAMS YOU NEVER LIVED AND SCARS NEVER HEALED IN THE DARKNESS LIGHT WILL TAKE YOU TO THE OTHER SIDE FIND ME WAITING THERE YOU'LL SEE IF YOU JUST CLOSE YOUR EYES |
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I respond to you on this very day just take a moment to hear what I say Lift your head up stand tall and strong I will lend you my hand if you need help to carry on Never believe that it's all over if you need to cry I will lend you my shoulder I will help you Noel i'm here as a friend I want you to know a broken heart can mend I hope this helps you Noel I truly do.. Daniel thank you |
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WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW TIME'S RUNNING OUT AINT NO MORE YOU CAN BORROW SO MANY PATHS WHICH ONE YOU GONNA FOLLOW WHAT WOULD YOU DO, IF IT ALL ENDED TOMORROW..... id ask god for a little more time just one last reflection of my life in rewind id make happy for everything i made sad turn everything into good, which i had made bad love a little more, cry a little less and come to realize ive been truely blessed id dance in the rain, sing in the shower swim the deepest ocean, and climb the highest tower wake before dawn, and watch the sun rise say hello again to all of my goodbyes work a lot less, play a little more reopen some of those closed doors i stand for a moment and take it all in then id step forth, and let my journey begin IF YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES YOU LIFE A NAKED TRUTH REVEALED DREAMS YOU NEVER LIVED AND SCARS NEVER HEALED IN THE DARKNESS LIGHT WILL TAKE YOU TO THE OTHER SIDE FIND ME WAITING THERE YOU'LL SEE IF YOU JUST CLOSE YOUR EYES |
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thorows flowers at you bravo bravo how true
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I respond to you on this very day just take a moment to hear what I say Lift your head up stand tall and strong I will lend you my hand if you need help to carry on Never believe that it's all over if you need to cry I will lend you my shoulder I will help you Noel i'm here as a friend I want you to know a broken heart can mend I hope this helps you Noel I truly do.. Daniel thank you You are welcome.. don't let anyone make you think you are not special |
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I respond to you on this very day just take a moment to hear what I say Lift your head up stand tall and strong I will lend you my hand if you need help to carry on Never believe that it's all over if you need to cry I will lend you my shoulder I will help you Noel i'm here as a friend I want you to know a broken heart can mend I hope this helps you Noel I truly do.. Daniel thank you You are welcome.. don't let anyone make you think you are not special yea,,thinks thats the prob..dont wanna get to personal on this board, but was in an abusive relationship for 7 yrs..and i thimk sometimes...i dont value who i am, because im not really sure who i am anymore... |
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yea,,thinks thats the prob..dont wanna get to personal on this board, but was in an abusive relationship for 7 yrs..and i thimk sometimes...i dont value who i am, because im not really sure who i am anymore... I know what it's like to be in a relationship like that.. and it's ok, you don't have to get personal.. I understand |
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I cant believe someone hurt you
As beautiful as are You find some one out there alot better As smart as you are, This day just started in your eyes, So spread your wings, and find whats new, cause your prince is out there waiting for you nice Written poem.Wow Beautiful Prince! |
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