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Topic: This is for sas
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Wed 03/19/08 05:41 PM
I am a gentle soul full of kindness and love I would be your angel a gift from above Within my heart there is tenderness like a beautiful flower and a soft gentle kiss My eyes they shine because my spirits so bright God has blessed me with some of heavens light I have so much to offer so much to give it's in my heart where true love lives If you stop long enough and really look at me if you just take some time then you would truly see Within my spirit within my soul lay the essence of a colorful rainbow By Daniel 03/19/08 This poem is dedicated to Sasfire because she has such a beautiful spirit and wonderful heart...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 03/19/08 05:42 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww Sweet Daniel...

daddysxgirlx35 Joined Mon 11/12/07 Posts: 588	Wed 03/19/08 05:44 PM
I THINK THAT YOUR POEM WAS BEAUTIFUL WHO EVER YOU DEDICATED IT TO IS A VERY LUCKY GIRL WELL I HOPE YOU ENLIGHTEN US WITH MORE OF YOUR POEMS

nonchalantwendy Joined Mon 12/17/07 Posts: 13574	Wed 03/19/08 05:45 PM
Very nice ........... Sas you must be a sweetheart........

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 03/19/08 05:46 PM


sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Wed 03/19/08 05:47 PM
You are my amazing friend Daniel you always surprise me when I think you cant surprise me anymore...that was so beautiful sweetie ty so much

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Wed 03/19/08 05:47 PM
She is a dear friend, and I just wanted to help her see things differently about her self..

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Wed 03/19/08 05:55 PM
She is a dear friend, and I just wanted to help her see things differently about her self.. That you have my dearest sweet Danielson....lol I loved it too you are the greatest friend I could ever ask for

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Wed 03/19/08 06:09 PM
Thank you all for your replies, but I just wanted to put sas in the spotlight.. the words I wrote are in her spirit, so I expressed them for her in my poem..

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 03/20/08 06:42 AM
aww Danield very sweet

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 03/20/08 07:49 AM
Wonderful Daniel! You're someone special Sas!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 08:40 AM
(((((pkh))))) (((((Vicki))))) I am going to give back to my friends, what they have given me.. so many wonderful and beautiful people in here.. It may take me a little time, but all of you are always on my mind.. I just want to show my appreciation for the wonderful people here

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 03/20/08 08:56 AM
Awwww Daniel you have already given back more then you realize keep up the good work

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 08:59 AM
Awwww Daniel you have already given back more then you realize keep up the good work Thank you kristi, but there is always more I should do.. everyone needs to know that they are loved.. you included

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 03/20/08 03:20 PM
Daniel there is nothing more you need to give, You show your love threw your words every time you post to one of us about something we have written... Being who you are is enough.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 03:55 PM
Daniel there is nothing more you need to give, You show your love threw your words every time you post to one of us about something we have written... Being who you are is enough. Vicki, you know me, I will always give of myself, it's my duty as a servant of the Lord, and I do it because it brings me great joy, just to bring a smile to someone's face, just to make them feel better, makes me happy