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“The cave of wonders”
He whispered in her ear. Grinning in anticipation, Grabbing her hand, “C’mon I’ll take you there“………… He shook his head At the doubt in her eyes. “Together we’ll face your fear, Hold on, I’m here, we’re gonna take that ride.” The entrance to the cave She’d known of all her life. Peering in, considering, But backing down every time. So now they faced that entry, Taking courage from his strength, Her curiosity rampant with Her urge to investigate. They entered the cave; It’s darkness pervading all around, Something told her, “don’t think, Just feel“, so she didn’t make a sound. The earth, it gently trembled, As skin brushed against skin. He kept her eyes glued to his, Love shining from within. He shed that light Over all her doubts. And chased her fears away. Don’t wish for more than you can handle, The cave of wonders demands With trust is how you play. |
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Its gettin hot in here again!
Nice write! (((Wench))) |
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Wed 03/19/08 02:33 PM
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Oh lets get real, y'all; this second version is more my style:
“The cave of wonders” He whispered in her ear. Grinning in anticipation, Grabbing her hand, “C’mon I’ll take you there“………… He shook his head At the doubt in her eyes. “Together we’ll face your fear, Hold on, I’m here, we’re gonna take that ride.” The entrance to the cave She’d known of all her life. Peering in, considering, But backing down every time. So now they faced that entry, Taking courage from his strength, Her curiosity rampant with Her urge to investigate. They entered the cave; It’s darkness pervading all around, Something told her, “don’t think, Just feel“, so she didn’t make a sound. The earth, it gently trembled, As skin brushed against skin. He kept her eyes glued to his, Love shining from within. The walls pulsed in rhythm Encouraging love’s twins. Delight in every movement As their exploration begins. As deep as they could, They both did go Arriving back, and then. With shining eyes, No longer shy, She hollered out “Again!” |
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Oh lets get real, y'all; this second version is more my style: “The cave of wonders” He whispered in her ear. Grinning in anticipation, Grabbing her hand, “C’mon I’ll take you there“………… He shook his head At the doubt in her eyes. “Together we’ll face your fear, Hold on, I’m here, we’re gonna take that ride.” The entrance to the cave She’d known of all her life. Peering in, considering, But backing down every time. So now they faced that entry, Taking courage from his strength, Her curiosity rampant with Her urge to investigate. They entered the cave; It’s darkness pervading all around, Something told her, “don’t think, Just feel“, so she didn’t make a sound. The earth, it gently trembled, As skin brushed against skin. He kept her eyes glued to his, Love shining from within. The walls pulsed in rhythm Encouraging love’s twins. Delight in every movement As their exploration begins. As deep as they could, They both did go Arriving back, and then. With shining eyes, No longer shy, She hollered out “Again!” Wench !!!!! |
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Saucy, Wench
"i like that" as evening falls and entrance light fades no glimmer at the end of the tunnel remains dark with jewels and gold and money and lust in the depths is a lamp, and a genie, and trust |
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Cool!
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oo, slow nicely done and thank you.
Hey jimz, Ms.T and BonnyMiss, y'all are just knowin me too well, but I like it..... |
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Hummm huhhh sounds like some one was screaming out in sweet ectasy
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very nice,I likeed it
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To know ya is to Love ya,, I so Love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Oh Tx, you have no idea. It's not so much the screaming that would be a problem; discerning what language I'm speakin in -- that can get interesting
pk, I'm glad you liked it Very rarely do people remain on the fence over what they think of me, LAMom. I've been lucky and the one's that really matter to me accept me as I am or just sit back and enjoy the show. I'm kinda like Forrest's momma's box of chocolates.... ty |
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i love it
Beauitful |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Thu 03/20/08 11:20 AM
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Theres no need to doubt
Let me take all your fears. I'll light some candles, There will be darkness no more. Lay a blanket on that cave floor, Tune on some sweet country music. There you can surrender to my charms, Will take it nice and slow, Your curiosity will end as Our exploration will begin. Gently touching skin to skin Ecohing through the night Whispers will turn to Passionate screams. Candles will flicker, And will begin again... |
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I love it when you let me have my way!
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Thank you, prince and welcome to JSH! Have a large time and enjoy....
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