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Edited by
nightruler
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Wed 03/19/08 09:13 AM
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Fall into my arms,
like an angel from a broken sky just take my hand,my precious one and feel the heaven in my eyes because every sigh is just for you you are all I dream about I ask on bended knee,its all I can do god knows I need you now I can't make it rain though it always rains where I stand Wanting so bad to touch your life with my words it's driving me insane I wanna feel your body close to me and I would never let you go but if these words dont say I love you then babe,you'll never know Another silent night,this endless need I ask the skies with little patience will god bring you to me Tell me what on earth I could say that will convince you I love you so I ask on bended knee as I pray please let this dream come true Bless this life with the smile of an angel and the passion of a beautiful dream please make these words like ice on fire and make her fall in love with me |
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What a wonderful plea
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Just beautiful,you have a gift and I could really relate to this one,as I'm sure many can,,,nice write
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very nice
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wow
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awwwwwww, that was amazing!
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Wonderful write!!!
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