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Topic: She doesnt...
rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Tue 03/18/08 05:33 PM
She caught your heart but not your soul She may know you but not like I know She gets to hold you but not like I would She doesn't respect you the way that she should She doesn't realize how lucky she is to have you to hold to be hand in hand. I would hold you in my heart forever staying to never part But alas a smile you see as the tears well behind not to be seen. Krystle McGee

johncarl Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 5074	Tue 03/18/08 05:36 PM


bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 03/18/08 05:39 PM
bravo!!

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Tue 03/18/08 05:43 PM
Very nice

rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Tue 03/18/08 07:27 PM
thanks

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 03/18/08 07:34 PM
very nice write

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 03/18/08 07:35 PM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 03/19/08 08:55 AM
(((( Krystle )))) Sadly Beautiful

granny2four Joined Tue 03/18/08 Posts: 70	Wed 03/19/08 10:48 AM
That was awesome, and I can relate to it.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 03/19/08 12:41 PM


rarerose Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 587	Wed 03/19/08 04:02 PM
thank you all (((granny2four))) I think a lot of us can

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