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oh give me a cold cause i like to sneeze it makes children laugh brings them to their knees and that is a sound i could hear everyday every night in the morning i would wake up and say this coffee's aroma is perfuming the air and waking me gently disturbing my lair but under the covers it's so warm here with you let's stay here for a while now what shall we do? aaaahhhhhhhh under the covers with you in the morn such a thought so easily born but you know its never a sin when all you want, is to sleep in! |
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She stood with the sunlight held in her hands,
caressing it as though she were a child... She wanted to rub it all over her skin, Let her inhibitions run wild. The warmth that ran through her fingertips, Felt so much like the friends that she knew. The sunlight that continued to gather about her, only grew, and grew, and grew. Oh her smile, I can still see today, having neither faded in memory or life... This is how she looked, the day that I met her. This is how she looked, when I made her my wife. She stood with the sunlight held in her hands, as the preacher promised us both to be, and then she took that sunlight, that she had shined so bright... and she shared her sunlight with me. The warmth that ran through our fingertips... Felt so much like the friends that we knew, And as the sunlight gathered to cover us both, it grew, and it grew, and it grew. How our love, I can still feel today, having neither faded in memory or life... The sun has only learned how to shine even brighter. My warmth, my sunlight... my wife. |
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wow, is it getting hot in here
open the widow, but not the door now let in some of that breeze you guys just might hit the floor |
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wow, is it getting hot in here open the widow, but not the door now let in some of that breeze you guys just might hit the floor michelle! its a wonderful thing that you joined us! come into the oven and write with the chorus so open the window and let in fresh air and maybe the sweat will dry from my hair |
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well thank you audrey
hopefully soon your hair will dry for i will come in then we all will join in |
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It's a good thing you showed up,
Audrey was getting to hot... and you know how she loves, to be put on the spot... she'll just throw a pitch, if she isn't the center of attention, cause the way that she pouts, well, do I need mention... So hello again, how are you today michelle, it's so very nice to see you hear, I hope your doing well... I must say that each time I read from you, a little catchy rhyme... that, It gets better everytime... and I can see that, I can read that... and girl.... that's PHAT! |
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so michelle how is your evening?
over here were definatly steaming but ill turn on the cooler and down with the heat though i have to say thatll be no easy feat so what playful things did your kids do today? did they play in the yard or roll in the hay? |
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i am doing swell
i put every effort into what i write, well i have been here for a while you haven't known for awhile |
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It's a good thing you showed up, Audrey was getting to hot... and you know how she loves, to be put on the spot... she'll just throw a pitch, if she isn't the center of attention, cause the way that she pouts, well, do I need mention... So hello again, how are you today michelle, it's so very nice to see you hear, I hope your doing well... I must say that each time I read from you, a little catchy rhyme... that, It gets better everytime... and I can see that, I can read that... and girl.... that's PHAT! frozn you fool! now i really am cool i didnt hear YOU Bi*chin when i rolled in your kitchen and warmed a lil spot on your countertop but i agree with wishes well for our dear michelles sweet little tunes sing like the loons and are getting quite swell |
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Edited by
Michelle_1982
on
Thu 03/20/08 05:18 AM
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you know how hard it is to read in a rhyme
like letters and e-mails without any rhyme my brain seems to try but it is not going to buy |
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now i didn't mean to start a fight
i'm only here to join in the flight |
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lol.... not fighting
just gently biting |
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no fighting no fighting,
but yes, some gentle biting... dont worry to much about that tho... if you like, one of us will nibble your toe... I hadn't really thought to much, about when I read mail, and the fact that it doesn't rhyme, might give someone hell... But now that you mention, I can see that it could... after all, once you get used to rhyming, it practically should! That's an oddly good point, Misses Michelle... I'm so sorry, that your regular, reads like such hell! |
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if that is gently
i would hate to see hard your laughing, i feel greatly let's all go join in the sand |
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frozn you fool!
now i really am cool i didnt hear YOU Bi*chin when i rolled in your kitchen and warmed a lil spot on your countertop but i agree with wishes well for our dear michelles sweet little tunes sing like the loons and are getting quite swell ah Miss Audrey, how I can cool your affections, like the sinking of the moons, and the rising of the suns... when we rolled in my kitchen, and you left a warm spot, I admit, when you got up, that the counter was hot... and that the air itself had even seemed to steam, for a second I thought I was caught, in a visual dream... but careful we must be, and careful we must play, when with the other children, we watch what we say! Just kidding, just kidding, we all know it's a joke... you, and anyoneelse, can say what they want, no matter what they spoke... although sometimes, we must be careful, of what we do say... after all, something to raunch, too risque... could get us all kicked off someday! |
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i agree completely with your mail lined quip
ifind myself trying to rhyme my book as i sip from my coffee this evening and all that im reading isnt so easy to lip! |
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frozn you fool! now i really am cool i didnt hear YOU Bi*chin when i rolled in your kitchen and warmed a lil spot on your countertop but i agree with wishes well for our dear michelles sweet little tunes sing like the loons and are getting quite swell ah Miss Audrey, how I can cool your affections, like the sinking of the moons, and the rising of the suns... when we rolled in my kitchen, and you left a warm spot, I admit, when you got up, that the counter was hot... and that the air itself had even seemed to steam, for a second I thought I was caught, in a visual dream... but careful we must be, and careful we must play, when with the other children, we watch what we say! Just kidding, just kidding, we all know it's a joke... you, and anyoneelse, can say what they want, no matter what they spoke... although sometimes, we must be careful, of what we do say... after all, something to raunch, too risque... could get us all kicked off someday! and you think that im thanking for that verbal spanking? oh well... i guess youre right so on with the fight and anyone thinking that thats too risque really doesnt know how to play |
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so woe is me
youll jsut have to see that this is quite mild for i can be really wild this really does pale to what i might sendto your mail! |
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i had thoughts of sending mail
that even might have a smell |
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i had thoughts of sending mail that even might have a smell im sur eyour mail would smell like roses but an interesting dilemma that poses some want cookies baking so sweetly others grass mown so neatly or maybe a parchment so crumbly old the air in the mountains so rich and so cold |
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