Topic: Thinking of you
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 01/05/07 09:34 AM
Your seclusion is just an illusion
I feel your eyes zoomin and movin
everywhere, I feel you there
and am comforted by your delusion
of being alone, my heart bare
just under the surface, I know you care
Your attention in this dimension
keeps me longing, not able to mention
cause I am wary of the stares
which will inevitably make those aware
and wonder
who, what, when, where
is she talkin to over there
all the who's what's and where's
don't really matter
I just want YOU to know
YOU're in my thoughts and prayers

no photo
Fri 01/05/07 10:23 AM
Like an angel fallen by her broken wings
in a world so cruel and unkind
And every starlit sky is just an illusion
because the dream can't escape her mind
She looks back on a time she knew how happiness felt
and how it was to be beautiful
She only wishes that she could have lived to tell
if only to bring some peace to the soul


michelllove's photo
Fri 01/05/07 10:31 AM
damn thats good

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/06/07 08:40 AM
*takes notes*

Good work to both of you,S.C.G. and JT...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/06/07 09:31 AM
As always very good girl.

JT ya still got it my man.

Ya's poems still go together like pieces
in a puzzle.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/06/07 09:34 AM
oh Ms.Txs....you just crack me up...Lmao!

Morena350's photo
Sat 01/06/07 11:04 PM
you guys write beautifully

Cybear's photo
Sun 01/07/07 04:01 PM
For Real!Morena.We are blessed to be within the same thread of
SCG,JTW,and Michael.They are all that and a super-size bag of Doritos.
There very hearts are like an open book exposed for the world to see
and learn from.These words spoken through the grace of Poetry,are one
of the sheerest truths you will ever encounter.No Magic,No Mystery
simply a humans feelings and experiences within it's rawest form
delivered via a poet's fingers.Your Poetry Rocks!!Godspeed!Cybear.