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Topic: Touch Me, Please
FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 11:03 PM
Touch me, please... Reach in and touch my soul Make the dawn have a sunset sky, Make the clouds and the thunder roll... Take me with you, where ever you want to go, I'm willing, even though I'm scared, A love like yours is so sweet, and soft, That to touch it, I barely dared. And now that I've felt it, I can't let it go, and I need you to touch me, To let your love show... That we just might be meant to stay together, Forever... the longest time that can be, That by touching your soul, and you touching mine... Forever belongs to you and me. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 03/15/08 11:07 PM
Ah- these love poems are starting to get to me! Beautiful!

wouldee Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 5335	Sat 03/15/08 11:08 PM Edited by wouldee on Sat 03/15/08 11:09 PM
I have had such a day today. Thank you. It is from God, that this woman has come for me to bless.

Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Sat 03/15/08 11:11 PM
your poems always catch my heart

wouldee Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 5335	Sat 03/15/08 11:15 PM
the child in your arms is blessed to have your love, Frozn Child. It will be well.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 11:16 PM
Ahh... Thank you everybody... Miss Teddy... More words from you eh? Love it. Thank you. Wouldee, Hope that your day has been good, at least since you got home, could kick the feet up!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 11:17 PM
your poems always catch my heart Thank you Enya... I didn't know that you read my poems... Seeing you post a comment means a lot to me. Too sweet. Catching your heart with my poetry, is so kind to say.

wouldee Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 5335	Sat 03/15/08 11:20 PM
word, my brother.

Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Sat 03/15/08 11:23 PM
your poems always catch my heart Thank you Enya... I didn't know that you read my poems... Seeing you post a comment means a lot to me. Too sweet. Catching your heart with my poetry, is so kind to say. I allways read your poems. I just dont always reply........ but,they are nice.keep up the good writes

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sat 03/15/08 11:49 PM
the child in your arms is blessed to have your love, Frozn Child. It will be well. Thank you... That really is some compliment.. I feel blessed.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/16/08 12:35 AM
your poems always catch my heart Thank you Enya... I didn't know that you read my poems... Seeing you post a comment means a lot to me. Too sweet. Catching your heart with my poetry, is so kind to say. I allways read your poems. I just dont always reply........ but,they are nice.keep up the good writes Lol... Well, I thank you for responding this time... and, I will. Thank you.

7Kate7 Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 195	Sun 03/16/08 08:35 AM
Great write.

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Sun 03/16/08 10:12 AM
you truly are a gift to behold to have such words flow

sassyma Joined Wed 09/19/07 Posts: 1139	Sun 03/16/08 10:24 AM
very nice write

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Sun 03/16/08 01:19 PM
Just a touch can speak a thousand words

Lozer Joined Wed 01/02/08 Posts: 198	Sun 03/16/08 02:32 PM
Beautiful write, beautiful subject. Great job<3 -Lozer

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Sun 03/16/08 02:34 PM
Froznchild - thank you for sharing such beautiful words. They speak to the soul as well as the heart. You are a gifted young man with a beautiful soul. I hope you find a sweet, bonnie lass, who will bring those words to life.

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sun 03/16/08 02:51 PM Edited by Sitngrin on Sun 03/16/08 02:51 PM
Touch me, please... Reach in and touch my soul Make the dawn have a sunset sky, Make the clouds and the thunder roll... Take me with you, where ever you want to go, I'm willing, even though I'm scared, A love like yours is so sweet, and soft, That to touch it, I barely dared. And now that I've felt it, I can't let it go, and I need you to touch me, To let your love show... That we just might be meant to stay together, Forever... the longest time that can be, That by touching your soul, and you touching mine... Forever belongs to you and me. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild Hey! Gimme me my magic pen back!!!!! (Great write, brother) ~D

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/16/08 05:58 PM
It's my magic pen... NEVER!!!... well, how about it we switch on and off? seems more fair... Hey Den, Great to see you. Thank you everyone... there are so many responses on this one, I just don't know where to start! The amount of responses, and the great, flowing cheer... Literally knock me outta my seat!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Sun 03/16/08 06:00 PM
Froznchild - thank you for sharing such beautiful words. They speak to the soul as well as the heart. You are a gifted young man with a beautiful soul. I hope you find a sweet, bonnie lass, who will bring those words to life. Lol... Bonnie Lass... That's my kinda girl allright. (Happy Saint Patty's Day everyone, being Irish, I've got some green on) Thank you for the flower, and for the hopes, and the compliments... I'm touched!