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Topic: It'd better not be...
MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/15/08 10:42 AM
It'd better not be a lie.
To make a person cry.
If those words had wings- I'm sure they'd sting.
And chit would surely fly.
Thats what happens when one lies.
Your heart would be black.
Would you take those words back.
Tell us- would you even try.
like a spider to web, trappings set with dread.
So before you open up your mouth-
Surly think what comes out- bad breath of lies.
Give honesty a major try.


Teddy 03-15-08

(I am rambeling today) drinker
Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/15/08 10:46 AM
Well my dear for ramblings you did invoke quite a few thoughts, I love it.

flowerforyou :heart: :heart:

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Sat 03/15/08 11:35 AM
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou Well stated... And So True!!
Noden's photo
Sat 03/15/08 11:40 AM
I think this is awesome, and when I get my internet back I am coming back to post more to your lovely write...MS.Teddy

Hugsflowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:


Noden
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Sat 03/15/08 11:51 AM
Miss Teddy,,,,,hereflowerforyou and THANK YOU.....:heart:

Oh,,,sorry,,,,,YES,I LOVED IT!!! Wink,wink,lolbigsmile :wink:
Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 03/15/08 02:02 PM
nice write. words of wisdom to be had. :smile: flowerforyou
LAMom's photo
Sat 03/15/08 02:38 PM
She is Women hear her Roarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

(((( Ms Teddy ))))

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