Topic: Someone loves you
nightruler's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:34 PM
Since the moment I saw your face
and the beauty that you define
I have only loved you silently
but always dreamt that you were mine
You never knew this side of me
because I couldn't take such a chance
If wings of desire shall set you free
then fall into my hands


I have wanted to tell you,
but how could I chance such a loss
someone you know is in love with you
and afraid of what this could cost
Someone dreams of you in silence
and faces the dawn alone
watching every sunrise just waiting
for you to someday know


I have watched the angels cry,
and my heart has drowned in their tears
The snow is falling on this glorious night
my god,I wish you were here
All these moments I want to share with you
the endless days I'd die in your arms
there is nothing that I wouldn't do
to always keep you close to my heart



From a distance of the perfect view
to where heaven and earth align
I will always send this prayer for you
in the hopes that one day you'll be mine

Prtyeyes4U's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:37 PM
Wow!!! That was beautiful!!! That brought tears to my eyes sad Dreams do come true so don't give up on your dreams!!!!

wanttachat's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:38 PM
*sigh mmmmmmmm

theels08's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:38 PM
dream dont come true

marangu88's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:39 PM

Since the moment I saw your face
and the beauty that you define
I have only loved you silently
but always dreamt that you were mine
You never knew this side of me
because I couldn't take such a chance
If wings of desire shall set you free
then fall into my hands


I have wanted to tell you,
but how could I chance such a loss
someone you know is in love with you
and afraid of what this could cost
Someone dreams of you in silence
and faces the dawn alone
watching every sunrise just waiting
for you to someday know


I have watched the angels cry,
and my heart has drowned in their tears
The snow is falling on this glorious night
my god,I wish you were here
All these moments I want to share with you
the endless days I'd die in your arms
there is nothing that I wouldn't do
to always keep you close to my heart



From a distance of the perfect view
to where heaven and earth align
I will always send this prayer for you
in the hopes that one day you'll be mine





I LOVE this poem. It is amazing. It sounds like a crush that stays a crush and never progresses. It shows emotion in the right way. Good poem!!!:heart: flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:50 PM
thank u very much

zanne46's photo
Fri 03/14/08 09:58 PM

Wow!!! That was beautiful!!! That brought tears to my eyes sad Dreams do come true so don't give up on your dreams!!!!


I agree..I felt the same emotion..

wow..beautiful...:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/15/08 03:38 AM
Nicely wrote! Never stop dreaming... flowerforyou

zanne46's photo
Sat 03/15/08 07:52 AM

dream dont come true


yes they do..

u just need to relax and find a different thing to focus on...

something fun for u instead of worrying about finding a girlfriend..

u are young ..and as I see in ur writings..not yet prepared..for having a girlfriend..

go experience other areas of life..then u will be secure enough with urself to be with a girl...

but have faith...things do work out...

not always the oerfect way we dream it to be..but good enough to make one happy..

go have some fun doing what ever...

u will see as u get older..that things do come our way..u just have to have a broader view of the world around you..


you really do have so many options out there..the world is all for you..go expand ur thoughts and wants..and take ur time and have fun while exploring..

flowerforyou


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Sat 03/15/08 05:44 PM
flowerforyou