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I watch the movement of the waves
as the sun beautifully sets bringing one joyous tear from my brightly lite eyes. I feel the warmth in my soul yet chills down my back and i know its a sign to head home. The chills are gone but the warmth remained as i cannot see through the darkness, but fear is not present as i feel at home in this place I do not know. As the darkness fades i see only light with shadows lurking behind it. and i know exactly where i am. HE took my pain and released me to my home with HIM in the sky. Now all is clear and happy as this is the only place I've ever felt so alive. Krystle McGee |
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Brilliantly written.I luv this write very much dear.Beautiful vision also by the way.Godspeed!CyPoet
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WOW Thats really good, I like
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(((CyPoet)))
(((jonny63))) Thank you |
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Very nice. I see a vision of serenity here.
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A beautiful dream... a wanted wish...
A good poem. What do these have in common? RareRose |
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wow thanks a bunch FroznChild
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Nice read....
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I watch the movement of the waves as the sun beautifully sets bringing one joyous tear from my brightly lite eyes. I feel the warmth in my soul yet chills down my back and i know its a sign to head home. The chills are gone but the warmth remained as i cannot see through the darkness, but fear is not present as i feel at home in this place I do not know. As the darkness fades i see only light with shadows lurking behind it. and i know exactly where i am. HE took my pain and released me to my home with HIM in the sky. Now all is clear and happy as this is the only place I've ever felt so alive. Krystle McGee (((( Krystle ))))) Your beauty shines |
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