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rarerose's photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:01 PM
I watch the movement of the waves
as the sun beautifully sets
bringing one joyous tear
from my brightly lite eyes.
I feel the warmth in my soul
yet chills down my back
and i know its a sign to head home.

The chills are gone but the warmth remained
as i cannot see through the darkness,
but fear is not present as i feel at home
in this place I do not know.

As the darkness fades i see only light
with shadows lurking behind it.
and i know exactly where i am.
HE took my pain and released me
to my home with HIM in the sky.
Now all is clear and happy
as this is the only place
I've ever felt so alive.

Krystle McGee

no photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:16 PM
Brilliantly written.I luv this write very much dear.Beautiful vision also by the way.Godspeed!CyPoet:smile: flowerforyou

jonny63's photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:32 PM
WOW Thats really good, I like:smile:

rarerose's photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:53 PM
(((CyPoet)))
(((jonny63)))

Thank you flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 03/13/08 06:18 PM
Very nice. I see a vision of serenity here.flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 08:00 PM
A beautiful dream... a wanted wish...
A good poem.
What do these have in common?
RareRose

rarerose's photo
Thu 03/13/08 08:40 PM
flowerforyou wow thanks a bunch FroznChild blushing

no photo
Thu 03/13/08 08:41 PM
:heart: Nice read....

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 09:06 PM

I watch the movement of the waves
as the sun beautifully sets
bringing one joyous tear
from my brightly lite eyes.
I feel the warmth in my soul
yet chills down my back
and i know its a sign to head home.

The chills are gone but the warmth remained
as i cannot see through the darkness,
but fear is not present as i feel at home
in this place I do not know.

As the darkness fades i see only light
with shadows lurking behind it.
and i know exactly where i am.
HE took my pain and released me
to my home with HIM in the sky.
Now all is clear and happy
as this is the only place
I've ever felt so alive.

Krystle McGee



(((( Krystle )))))

Your beauty shines :heart: