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Topic: Haiku at Frozn's request
silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Thu 03/13/08 04:27 PM
Cherry Blossoms rain Together we stand in awe Sweetly smiling Love Multicolored leaves Playfully dance in the wind How lovely they are Crickets sing nightly The warm breeze carresses your skin Kiss me deeply, Now! Stark Snow covers mountains Watch the sleeping valley Will you remember me?

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Thu 03/13/08 04:29 PM
beautiful

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 03/13/08 04:34 PM
super

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Thu 03/13/08 04:42 PM
oh thank you so much

will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Thu 03/13/08 04:43 PM
Nice

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 04:48 PM
Beautiful, Super, Nice, and so much more... Thank you, Silverwaya, for this exotic piece of work... When you were kissed so deeply in the poem, it was like kissing no other. J/k. Not only will I remember you, I will most assuredly remember this haiku! So very well written... (you didn't have to do that, but, I'm glad that you did) Thank you, doesn't say enough...

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/13/08 04:54 PM
ahhh, nothing like reading something so nicely put together Very nice indeed

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 04:59 PM
Lol... thought you might like a different response on this one... (hope you liked it)

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Thu 03/13/08 05:01 PM
Beautiful, Super, Nice, and so much more... Thank you, Silverwaya, for this exotic piece of work... When you were kissed so deeply in the poem, it was like kissing no other. J/k. Not only will I remember you, I will most assuredly remember this haiku! So very well written... (you didn't have to do that, but, I'm glad that you did) Thank you, doesn't say enough... Well I am glad that I surprised you. A kiss like that is like no other, truly breath taking. so blessed to have you and one other in my life

silverwaya Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 1049	Thu 03/13/08 05:02 PM
ahhh, nothing like reading something so nicely put together Very nice indeed oh thank you very much!!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76464	Thu 03/13/08 05:04 PM
very nice

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/13/08 05:04 PM
ahhh, nothing like reading something so nicely put together Very nice indeed oh thank you very much!!! You are so very welcome...

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/13/08 07:06 PM
Lol... we all know the "one other" is way in front of me... Lmao.

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