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Twenty years have passed my eyes like minutes to an hour.
No longer child they call me man yet they strip my power. A constant struggle deep within, no control or feelings. A force inside, silenced cries, shorted of lifes dealings. Confusion fills my once clear mind as building hate grows stronger. Mind has left, without a trace... man I am no longer. |
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i know what u mean lol
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Twenty years have passed my eyes like minutes to an hour. No longer child they call me man yet they strip my power. A constant struggle deep within, no control or feelings. A force inside, silenced cries, shorted of lifes dealings. Confusion fills my once clear mind as building hate grows stronger. Mind has left, without a trace... man I am no longer. |
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another good one
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A very excellent write indeed. Short, but deep... becareful where you step... you just might drown.
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